Kikokugai Error Reports

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This is the Error Reporting page for Kikokugai - The Cyber Slayer-.

Typos, suspected mistranslations, weirdly worded lines, technical errors such as crashes/badly displayed lines should go here.

Note that previously reported errors are in the archives, and that by the very nature of error reporting, you are likely to encounter spoilers. Redundant reports do not present a problem, so do not worry about them.

Please be nice.

Typos/Spelling errors[edit]

"Once the commotion has died down, Xie Yida enteres Liu's bedroom." <= Should be enters.

"Aside from the severed right arm, no damage is visible on Zhang's body - an inexplicable end for a reknowned cyber-warrior." <-- Renowned.

"I fear that you will forget everything - this peach garden, that I await your return - and vanish to some place were I cannot reach you." <-- where

"Although the weapon's tip easily pieces the fabric, he is able to shift his head enough that the wire only grazes his cheek." - Should be pierces.

"His pours out his emotions as they come, casting them into an empty void from which not even an echo returns." - Should be he.

"This must how the brain - Misha - normally talks." -BlickWinkel 05:00, 10 February 2010 (UTC)

"Thanks, Ran. Sorry to put you though all this." <-- through

"In the minutes of chaos bought by the gears' raid, the AI cracking program, tuned for maximum financial damage in the least amount of time, dealt a far heavier blow than the loss of materiel and personnel." <-- brought, material

(I thought it was the idiom "buying time") -BlickWinkel 16:08, 16 February 2010 (UTC)

"Doctor, I thought you didn't want your experiment to go waste." <-- to go to waste.

"The security camera got it on film," Ng says, taking Liu's queue. <-- wrong spelling; should be "cue". -the_paper 12:05, 18 May 2010 (UTC)

Grammar rules[edit]

Missing commas, wrong punctuation etc.

"yet more joy still she gains from watching the dolls face twist in pain"

"their speed and flexibility more than makes up the difference"

"Or is it something other wearing his sister's persona as a disguise?" [else?] -BlickWinkel 02:47, 10 February 2010 (UTC)

Technical related errors[edit]

Any technical problem. (Please make sure you've carefully read and followed the installation instructions, before reporting any technical error.)

Saya game engine crashes upon reaching end credits.

"Eyes glittering dangerously, the man raises his left hand. The sound of a tiny silver bell rings out clear and pure, so very unsuited to this setting.

"Was it you who sold this, Xie Yida?""

The window automatically skips from the first two lines to the next line. Also, the sprite shows the bracelet in his right hand, but whatever. -BlickWinkel 03:32, 10 February 2010 (UTC)

The backlog sometimes opens automatically when you hover the cursor over the game window or over the game on the taskbar.

Misc[edit]

For those not fitting in any of the above.

"The grinding power of diamond files with such speed and weight behind them defies the imagination." - Engrishy, ...have such speed and behind behind them as to defy the imagination, or The weight and speed behind the grinding power of the diamond files defies the imagination. - A_V

"Not only Zhang, but even Zhu have fallen to him"

Not sure if it should be 'has' or 'have.' Reporting anyway. -BlickWinkel 03:55, 10 February 2010 (UTC)

It should be 'has' - Anonymous

Pretty sure it should be spelled "Petrushka": http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Petrushka