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;背景 教室 昼
@bg storage=bg_05a rule=rule_f_t time=1000
@bgm storage=bgm_03

@chr c=haru_a_se_06_b
Following Usami's bizarre antics on New Year's Day, my peaceful school life began anew.[np]
;;it's good to be back in business, working chapter oh-four. - pondr

[nm t="ハル" s=har_8648]“Dang, though. It sure is hard to get excited around here without Kanon.”[np]
;;[nm t="ハル" s=har_8648]“しかし、花音がいないと、いまいち盛り上がりませんねえ”[np]

[nm t="京介"]“She'll be back in a month.”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“ひと月もしたら帰ってくるよ”[np]

@chr c=haru_b_se_03_b
[nm t="ハル" s=har_8649]“And Tsubaki's so busy these days between her housework and the student council...”[np]
;;[nm t="ハル" s=har_8649]“椿姫もなにやら家事と学園の行事に追われているようですしね”[np]

[nm t="京介"]“Looks like you, me, and Eiichi are the only ones with any free time.”[np]
;;the original Chinese translation here probably sounds better so I'll leave it, but here it is literally
;;"The only people with free time are you, me, and Eiichi"
;;[nm t="京介"]“暇なのはおれとお前と栄一くらいだ”[np]

@chr r=eiichi_a_se_06_s
[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7491]“Who are y'all saying has free time?”[np]
;;"Who has free time?"
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7491]“誰が、暇だって?”[np]

Speak of the devil... here comes Mr. Idle Hands himself.[np]
;;"The guy with too much free time on his hands appeared’
;;wahahahaha two devil idioms in one... victory dance - pondr

@dellay pos=c
@chr l=haru_b_se_01_s r=eiichi_a_se_09b_s
[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7492]“You guys hear anything about the new transfer student coming today?”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7492]“なんかさー、今日から新しく転入生が来るみたいだよ”[np]

[nm t="京介"]“Hm? At this time of year?”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“へー、こんな時期にかよ”[np]

[nm t="ハル" s=har_8650]“Is it a guy or a girl?”[np]
;;[nm t="ハル" s=har_8650]“どんな人ですか?”[np]
;;awkward in english to ask "what kind of person" before being able to use the proper pronoun, so I figured might as well just make it "first question" - pondr

@chr r=eiichi_a_se_02b_s
[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7493]“Hmph...”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7493]“フン……”[np]

@chr l=haru_b_se_03_s
[nm t="ハル" s=har_8651]“Huh?”[np]
;;[nm t="ハル" s=har_8651]“あれ?”[np]

Eiichi inexplicably turned away from Usami.[np]

[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7494]“Usami-san... I'm pretty mad at you, you know.”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7494]“宇佐美さん。ボクはね、怒ってるんだよ?”[np]

@chr l=haru_a_se_08_s
[nm t="ハル" s=har_8652]“Oh...”[np]
;;[nm t="ハル" s=har_8652]“あ……”[np]

@chr r=eiichi_a_se_06_s
[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7495]“What happened to your promise to introduce me to a sexy big-sister type?”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7495]“きれいなお姉さんを紹介してくれる話はどこにいったの?”[np]

@chr l=haru_b_se_03_s
[nm t="ハル" s=har_8653]“I'm really, really sorry.”[np]
;;[nm t="ハル" s=har_8653]“ま、誠に申し訳ございませぬ”[np]

@chr r=eiichi_a_se_02b_s
[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7496]“I'm sick and tired of those empty apologies!”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7496]“形だけの謝罪なんていいんだよ!”[np]

[nm t="ハル" s=har_8654]“Y-yes, Sir...!”[np]
;;[nm t="ハル" s=har_8654]“は、ははあ……!”[np]

[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7497]“Oh, shove it! You two think you can get away with anything as long as you get on your hands and knees afterwards!”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7497]“お前らはいつもそうだ! 安い頭を下げれば許してもらえると思っている!”[np]

[nm t="ハル" s=har_8655]“Th-though it's no excuse... the thing is...”[np]
;;[nm t="ハル" s=har_8655]“か、返す言葉もありませんが……実はその……”[np]

[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7498]“I don't wanna hear it!”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7498]“言いわけは聞かん!”[np]

@chr l=haru_b_se_17_s
[nm t="ハル" s=har_8656]“I can't get in touch with her.”[np]
;;[nm t="ハル" s=har_8656]“音信不通になりまして”[np]

[nm t="京介"]“What?”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“へえ”[np]

@chr l=haru_b_se_03_s
[nm t="ハル" s=har_8657]“I don't even know why Yuki decided to come to this city, to tell the truth.”[np]
;;[nm t="ハル" s=har_8657]“いまとなってはなぜ、ユキがこの街に来たのかもわかりません”[np]

[nm t="京介"]“Well, it's not like you can do anything about that... isn't that right, Eiichi?”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“じゃあ、しょうがねえな”[np]

@chr r=eiichi_b_se_02_s
[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7499]“Goddammit!”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7499]“けっ!”[np]

[nm t="京介"]“Oh, don't get your panties in a wad. I met the girl, and she was way out of your league, okay?”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“そんなにむくれるなよ。おれもその女に会ったが、どうにも一筋縄じゃいかなさそうだったぞ?”[np]

@chr r=eiichi_a_se_04c_s
[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7500]“No one's out of [ font italic="true" ]my[ resetfont ] league, Bro.”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7500]“ボクに限ってだいじょうぶだよ”[np]

Where the hell does all that confidence come from...?[np]

@chr r=eiichi_a_se_07_s
[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7501]“You've been forgetting lately, and I forgive you for that, but try to remember that I'm the cute type.”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7501]“最近、忘れてるみたいだけど、ボクってかわいい系なんだからね”[np]

[nm t="京介"]“Oh, right. You know, me and my memory.”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“すっかり忘れてたわ”[np]

@chr r=eiichi_a_se_03b_s
[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7502]“Ahhhhh... hey, what if the transfer student turns out to be that girl Yuki?”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7502]“あーあー、転入生が、そのユキって子だったらなー”[np]

@chr l=haru_a_se_07_s
[nm t="ハル" s=har_8658]“That's ridiculous...”[np]
;;[nm t="ハル" s=har_8658]“そんな馬鹿な……”[np]

[nm t="京介"]“Not even some poorly translated porno game would have such a convenient plot development.”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“んなお前の都合のいい展開になるわけねえだろ”[np]
;;har har. Bite me, and feel free to revert to whatever you want. But make it fit Eiichi's next line - pondr
;;we can make it porno game instead, that way the poorly translated part becomes a meta joke about this project.
;;It was supposed to be one... v.v Guess that wasn't clear enough. - pondr

@chr r=eiichi_a_se_12b_s
[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7503]“Ain't that the truth.”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7503]“だよねー”[np]

[nm t="京介"]“So just give the girl up already. You never even met her.”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“まあ、あきらめるんだな”[np]

@chr l=haru_b_se_03_s
[nm t="ハル" s=har_8659]“I'm really, very sorry.”[np]
;;[nm t="ハル" s=har_8659]“ほんとにすいませんでした”[np]

@chr r=eiichi_a_se_03b_s
[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7504]“Haah, can't a guy have a little hope...?”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7504]“ふう、ミラクル起きねえかな……”[np]

@black rule=rule_u_s time=1000



;背景 教室 昼
@bg storage=bg_05a rule=rule_u_s time=300

@camera angle=r

@se storage=se_37

@chr r=yuki_b_se_01_s
[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7145]“Hello everyone, it's very nice to meet you. My name is Tokita Yuki.”[np]
;;[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7145]“はじめまして、みなさん。時田ユキです”[np]

[nm t="京介"]“......”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“…………”[np]

@mface name=haru_a_se_08_s
[nm t="ハル" s=har_8660]“......”[np]
;;[nm t="ハル" s=har_8660]“…………”[np]

Usami and I both turned to face each other.[np]

@mface name=eiichi_b_se_01_s
[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7505]“Oh HELL YEAH.”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7505]“グレイトだぜぇ♪”[np]

@bgm storage=bgm_05

Springtime had come for Eiichi.[np]
;;I think it was a bit awkward before. Change if you don't like, doesn't matter.

@chr r=yuki_b_se_04b_s
[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7146]“Getting to know new people is one of my favorite things to do.”[np]
;;[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7146]“趣味は、人と話をすることです”[np]

Eiichi's eyes sparkle.[np]

@chr r=yuki_b_se_16_s
[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7147]“So as you might imagine, it's quite a pleasure to meet you all.”[np]
;;[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7147]“どうぞ、よろしくお願いします”[np]

@quake pos=r sx=0 sy=15 xcnt=0 ycnt=1 time=600
@wait time=600
When she bowed, her straight hair wavered softly.[np]

@mface name=eiichi_b_se_15b_s
[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7506]“I think I just jizzed in my pants.”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7506]“シビレるぜぇ”[np]
;;this probably gets the feel of shibireru ze~ across but might be a bit much
;;Might as well reference the SNL vid. If we're going insane take the whole hog! ~ Newbie

Eiichi's lips twisted into an evil smile.[np]

The very instant the teacher began to scan the desks for an empty seat for Tokita, Eiichi stood up as if it were his duty to do so.[np]

@camera angle=l
@chr ll=eiichi_a_se_07_s
[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7507]“I think she should sit next to me!”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7507]“ボクの隣がいいと思うな!”[np]

Eiichi's prayer to the goddess of convenient literary devices was answered a second time, as the seat beside him turned out to be truly empty.[np]

@chr r=yuki_b_se_01_s
@chr_pos_change before=r after=c time=800
Tokita walked toward that seat.[np]

@chr ll=eiichi_a_se_04b_s
[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7508]“Hey there, my name is Aizawa Eiichi. Eiichi's fine, though.”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7508]“こんにちは、ボク、相沢栄一。栄一でいいよ”[np]

@chr c=yuki_b_se_04b_s
[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7148]“It's nice to meet you, Eiichi-kun.”[np]
;;[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7148]“はじめまして、栄一くん”[np]

@chr ll=eiichi_a_se_01b_s
[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7509]“Feel free to ask me anything. I'll bet you've got a lot of questions about our school.”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7509]“なにかわからないことあったら、なんでもボクに言ってね”[np]

@chr c=yuki_b_se_04c_s
[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7149]“I appreciate the notion. You can call me Yuki.”[np]
;;[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7149]“ありがと、私のこともユキでいいわ”[np]

Tokita smiled back at him with a childlike, innocent smile.[np]

@mface name=eiichi_b_se_01_s
[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7510]“(Oh my GOD, this is so perfect, SO PERFECT! Usami's friend is ridiculously polite! She's even got an intelligent smell to her!)”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7510]“(おいおい、いいじゃねえの、いいじゃねえの? 宇佐美の友達にしては礼儀正しいし、知的なスメルがするぜえ)”[np]
;;intelligent smell is nonsensical... so I thought I should leave it in ^.^ - pondr

I wonder how he's keeping from drooling all over himself?[np]

@chr c=yuki_b_se_01_s
[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7150]“...Is everything alright? You're staring at me.”[np]
;;[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7150]“……どうかしたの、じっと見て?”[np]

@chr ll=eiichi_a_se_04_s
[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7511]“Everything's peachy, I was just admiring how tall you are.”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7511]“んーん、背が高いなーって”[np]

@chr c=yuki_b_se_01b_s
[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7151]“Really, now?”[np]
;;[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7151]“そう?”[np]

@chr ll=eiichi_a_se_04b_s
[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7512]“And how pretty your hair is!”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7512]“髪もすごいキレイだなーって”[np]

@chr c=yuki_b_se_04c_s
[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7152]“Well, thank you.”[np]
;;[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7152]“ありがと”[np]

@chr ll=eiichi_a_se_01c_s
[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7513]“You're a model or something, right?”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7513]“モデルとかやってるんでしょ?”[np]

[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7153]“No, but that's quite the flattering misconception.”[np]
;;[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7153]“やってないけど、うれしいわね”[np]

@mface name=eiichi_b_se_15a_s
[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7514]“(Hehehe. Compliments are the fastest way to take down a woman.)”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7514]“(へっへっへ、女は褒め殺してなんぼだぜぇ)”[np]
;;"take down" like "finish the hunt", if that's not clear. - pondr

@mface name=eiichi_a_se_01c_s
[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7515]“You smell really, really nice, Yuki-san.”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7515]“ユキさんって、なんかすごい、いい匂いするね”[np]

@chr c=yuki_b_se_04b_s
[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7154]“Haha... you think so?”[np]
;;[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7154]“ふふ……そう?”[np]
;;That's what I want to say... "fufu..." really? FUFU IS NOT A LAUGH PEOPLE ふふ might be, but FUFU isn't. - pondr

@mface name=eiichi_b_se_15b_s
[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7516]“(Hehe, it's working, it's working!)”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7516]“(へへ、効いてる、効いてるぅ)”[np]

...Whatever you think, man.[np]

@chr ll=eiichi_a_se_01c_s
[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7517]“Hey, hey... do you like animals?”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7517]“ねえねえ、動物とか好き?”[np]

@chr c=yuki_b_se_01_s
[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7155]“I like kittens.”[np]
;;[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7155]“猫は好きね”[np]

@chr ll=eiichi_a_se_04b_s
[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7518]“Oh, yeah, kittens are my favorite. Looks like we have a lot in common.”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7518]“ボクも猫が一番好き。気が合うね”[np]

I could have sworn reptiles were Eiichi's favorite...[np]

@chr c=yuki_a_se_01b_s
[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7156]“Oh, sorry. I like kittens, but I like dogs more.”[np]
;;[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7156]“あ、ごめんなさい。犬のほうが好きかしらね”[np]

[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7519]“Oh, then dogs are my favorite.”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7519]“あ、じゃあ、ボクも犬が一番好き”[np]

'Then dogs are my favorite?'[np]

@chr ll=eiichi_a_se_06_s
[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7520]“Well, actually, my favorite is...”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7520]“まあ、でも、一番好きなのは……”[np]

@chr c=yuki_a_se_09b_s
[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7157]“Hmm?”[np]
;;[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7157]“うん?”[np]

Eiichi checked Yuki out.[np]

@chr ll=eiichi_a_se_07b_s
[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7521]“Mm, nah, never mind.”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7521]“ん、ううん、なんでもないっ”[np]

He suddenly shook his head in a sickeningly cute way.[np]

That was horribly disgusting.[np]
;;EIICHI IS A PIMP. I liked it, personally! Way to save the situation from "weirdo who doesn't know how to flirt" to "punchline pick-up gag" - pondr

Tokita continued smiling as she finally spoke up.[np]

@chr c=yuki_a_se_07b_s
[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7158]“Hmm... if I'm ever in a pinch, could I count on you, Eiichi-kun?”[np]
;;[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7158]“そうね……頼りにしてもいいかしら、栄一くん?”[np]
;;isn't it sad, sacchin? - pondr
;;and ten bucks says this line comes up again. tell you what, I'll come back to this if it does, otherwise, who cares if it's only so-so. - pondr

@chr ll=eiichi_a_se_07_s
[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7522]“Of course!”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7522]“うんっ!”[np]

Just like that, the new year began, and Eiichi greeted his Spring... or did he?[np]

;背景 屋上 昼
@black rule=rule_u_s time=1500
@wait time=1000
@bg storage=bg_22a rule=rule_u_s time=1000
@bgm storage=bgm_03

@chr r=eiichi_a_se_01b_s l=yuki_a_se_01b_s


[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7523]“Seriously though, that pastry chef was a really nice guy...”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7523]“それでね、そのパティシエがね、すっごい気さくな人でね……”[np]

Eiichi's offensive was in full swing come noontime.[np]

Tokita doesn't seem to be tired of it, as she listens to his banter and occasionally gives her opinion.[np]

[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7524]“So, you said you were artistic?”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7524]“へえ、茶道が趣味なんだー”[np]

@chr l=yuki_a_se_04_s
[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7159]“No, I said I'm sadistic.”[np]
;;original line is "you're interested in tea ceremonies (sadou)?" "no, sadism (sado)". thanks to moogy for the idea. feel free to improve it if you editor(s) think of a better alternative, though.
;;[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7159]“ううん、サドよ。サド”[np]
;;I feel like it should be something feminine, or at least moreso than ballistics. Linguistics comes to mind, but I felt this would be better. - pondr

@chr r=eiichi_a_se_04b_s
[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7525]“That's great, I'm pretty artistic too.”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7525]“いいよね、ボクもお茶大好き”[np]

Eiichi doesn't have a care in the world, does he...?[np]
;;this is supposed to carry a negative nuance, similar to calling someone simple.

[nm t="京介"]“Tokita, thanks for your help the other day.”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“時田、この前は世話になったな”[np]

I suddenly interrupted the two of them.[np]

@chr l=yuki_a_se_07b_s
[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7160]“Don't worry about it. It was fun.”[np]
;;[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7160]“いいのよ。楽しかったわ”[np]

@chr r=eiichi_a_se_01c_s
[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7526]“Eh, what-what? What are you guys talking about?”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7526]“え、なになに、どうしたの?”[np]

@chr l=yuki_a_se_04_s
[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7161]“I just had a little fun with Kyousuke-kun the other day, isn't that right?”[np]
;;[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7161]“この前少し、京介くんと遊んだのよ、ね?”[np]

@mface name=eiichi_b_se_02_s
[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7527]“(You better fucking explain, Kyousuke!)”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7527]“(なんだと、京介ぇ!?)”[np]

[nm t="京介"]“Oh, uh, not that kind of ‘fun’... Usami was there too.”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“あ、いや、遊んだっつーか……宇佐美もいたけどな”[np]
;;probably should be rephrased, sounds weird

@chr l=yuki_a_se_09b_s
[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7162]“Come to think of it, where is Haru?”[np]
;;[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7162]“そういえば、ハルは?”[np]

@chr r=eiichi_a_se_01b_s
[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7528]“The two of you are friends, right?”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7528]“お友達なんだよね?”[np]

@chr l=yuki_a_se_04_s
[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7163]“Yeah, we both transferred from the same school.”[np]
;;[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7163]“ええ、前の学園でいっしょだったの”[np]

@chr r=eiichi_a_se_09_s
[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7529]“Why did you decide to move at this time of year?”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7529]“なんでこんな時期に転入してきたの?”[np]

@chr l=yuki_a_se_01b_s
[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7164]“It has to do with my father's work.”[np]
;;[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7164]“お父さんのお仕事の関係でね”[np]
;;har har nice save yuki - pondr
;;issues changed since it's not really a problem(if anything it was a promotion, as explained later) the original translation used problems and I just kind of ignored it since I was lazy.

He got transferred, huh...?[np]

[nm t="京介"]“How old are you, anyway?”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“お前って、歳いくつなんだ?”[np]

@chr r=eiichi_a_se_06_s
[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7530]“Kyousuke-kun, you can't ask a woman her age! Don't you know that by now!?”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7530]“京介くん、そんなこと聞いちゃだめでしょ?”[np]

@chr l=yuki_a_se_09b_s
[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7165]“What about you, Kyousuke-kun?”[np]
;;[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7165]“京介くんは?”[np]

[nm t="京介"]“I'm old enough to smoke and drink.”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“おれはいちおう、飲酒も喫煙も許される年齢だが?”[np]
;;and be in a porno - pondr

@chr l=yuki_a_se_07_s
[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7166]“Is that so? You must have repeated quite a few years, then.”[np]
;;[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7166]“あらそう。けっこう、留年したのね?”[np]

[nm t="京介"]“I guess. This school is full of people like me, though.”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“まあな。でも、この学園にはそういうヤツもちょこちょこいるぞ?”[np]

@chr l=yuki_a_se_07b_s
[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7167]“I hear it's something like a talent school. I ran into a celebrity just a few moments ago.”[np]
;;[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7167]“芸能スクールみたいだものね。さっきアイドルグループの子を見かけたわ”[np]

[nm t="京介"]“Yeah. They all skip school, get held back a year or so, eventually graduate... then continue to fight to hide their age in the world of showbiz.”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“ああ、あいつはそのうち休学するだろ。そしてダブって卒業。歳をごまかして芸能界にもまれる、と”[np]

@chr l=yuki_a_se_01_s
[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7168]“Isn't it wonderful to have dreams though?”[np]
;;[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7168]“夢があっていいじゃない”[np]

[nm t="京介"]“Sure. Anyway, the only people not doing stuff behind the scenes around here are Tsubaki, Usami, and, uh... me...”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“そうだな。とくに裏で活動とかしてないのは、おれの周りじゃ、椿姫と宇佐美と……おれ……”[np]

@chr l=yuki_a_se_04_s
[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7169]“Hehe...”[np]
;;[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7169]“ふふ……”[np]

Tokita knows about my other side.[np]

[nm t="京介"]“Well, there you have it. Our class is particularly bad; just about everyone's part of something or other.”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“そんなもんかな。とくに、うちのクラスは、たいがいどっかのタレント事務所に所属してたりするから”[np]

[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7170]“What about Eiichi-kun?”[np]
;;[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7170]“栄一くんは?”[np]

@chr r=eiichi_a_se_04b_s
[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7531]“I'm a free man!”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7531]“ボクは、フリーだよ”[np]

[nm t="京介"]“Oh, shut up. You're just another rich brat, aren't you?”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“ただのボンボンだろ?”[np]

[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7532]“How could you say that!? I'm an orphan...”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7532]“やだなあ、ボクはみなしごだよ”[np]

[nm t="京介"]“Anyway, the people here are all either rich or famous.”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“まあ、ここに通ってるのはたいがいボンボンか、一芸持ってるやつだな”[np]


I think Tsubaki's here on full scholarship, but what about Usami?[np]

Is that dirt-poor girl actually some filthy rich heiress to a multinational corporation or something?[np]
;;hehe dirt poor and filthy rich. Never noticed that. - pondr

Now that I think about it, I haven't seen Usami since noon.[np]

@chr r=eiichi_a_se_01c_s
[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7533]“If you wanna talk rich, Kyousuke and Shiratori are the two biggest players there.”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7533]“ボンボンといえば、京介くんと白鳥さんが二大巨塔だね”[np]

[nm t="京介"]“Shiratori literally owns this school.”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“白鳥はこの学園の支配者だからな”[np]

And less than two months ago, the Shiratori family was investigated by the police. All charges were dropped shortly thereafter.[np]

[nm t="京介"]“She's the daughter of the director. She might as well be a glacier, between how cold she is and how little she talks.”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“そいつは、学園の理事の娘なんだよ。だが、ひどい突っ張った性格でな”[np]
;;icier is a weird word... - pondr

@chr l=yuki_a_se_09b_s
[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7171]“Oh...? Is she here today?”[np]
;;[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7171]“へえ……今日は来てるの?”[np]

@chr r=eiichi_a_se_01b_s
[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7534]“I think so. She's always hanging around alone somewhere. Seriously, that girl is...”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7534]“来てるよ。いつも一人でいるみたい。でも、あの子はさー……”[np]

@chr l=yuki_a_se_03b_s
[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7172]“Poor girl.”[np]
;;[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7172]“かわいそうね”[np]

@chr r=eiichi_a_se_08_s
[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7535]“Ah, yeah... poor girl, it's so sad.”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7535]“そ、そうだね。かわいそうだよ、うん”[np]

Eiichi is still trying desperately to get on Tokita's good side.[np]

@chr l=yuki_a_se_09b_s
[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7173]“And Haru is still nowhere to be seen, is she...?”[np]
;;[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7173]“それにしても、ハルは?”[np]

[nm t="京介"]“Why is Usami always avoiding you?”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“知らないが、宇佐美は、なんでお前から逃げるんだ?”[np]

@chr l=yuki_a_se_09_s
[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7174]“I have no earthly idea. I can't think of a single reason for her to bear such a repulsion to me.”[np]
;;[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7174]“わからないわ。嫌われる理由は見当たらないのに”[np]
;;repulsion to? is that right? my science education can only make me think two things repulse each other. - pondr

[nm t="京介"]“Maybe she doesn't like being groped at all the time...”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“お前に胸をもまれるのが嫌だとか……”[np]
;;"groped at" means like sexually harassed. - pondr

@chr l=yuki_a_se_06_s
My idle supposition seemed to excite Tokita, as her eyes began to sparkle.[np]

[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7175]“That can't be it. I can please Haru like no man ever could...!!!”[np]
;;[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7175]“そんなはずないわ。ちゃんと感じてたもの……!!!”[np]

@chr r=eiichi_a_se_11_s
[nm t="京介"]“......”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“…………”[np]

[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7536]“......”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7536]“…………”[np]

@chr l=yuki_a_se_09_s
[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7176]“Hm? Did I say something strange?”[np]
;;[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7176]“あれ? わたしなにか変?”[np]

@chr r=eiichi_a_se_08b_s
[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7537]“N-nope. Not at all.”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7537]“ん、んーん、ぜんぜん”[np]

...Yet another strange person has joined our ranks.[np]

;背景 教室 昼
@black rule=rule_i_l time=1000
@bg storage=bg_05a rule=rule_i_l time=1000
@bgm storage=bgm_104
Even Usami can't escape class.[np]

@mface name=yuki_b_se_16b_s
[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7177]“Hey, Haru...”[np]
;;[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7177]“ねえ、ハル……”[np]

@mface name=haru_a_se_08_s
[nm t="ハル" s=har_8661]“Wh-what?”[np]
;;[nm t="ハル" s=har_8661]“な、なにかな?”[np]

She jumped a little when Tokita addressed her.[np]
;;shoulders trembled, same thing - pondr

@mface name=yuki_b_se_02_s
[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7178]“Are you really that angry about what happened?”[np]
;;[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7178]“そんなに、あのときのこと怒ってるの?”[np]

@mface name=haru_a_se_09_s
[nm t="ハル" s=har_8662]“What happened...?”[np]
;;[nm t="ハル" s=har_8662]“あのときというと……?”[np]

@mface name=yuki_b_se_04_s
[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7179]“Oh, you know... when I wrapped my arms around you, like this...”[np]
;;[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7179]“ほら、わたしが、こうやって腕を回して……”[np]

@mface name=haru_a_se_14_s
[nm t="ハル" s=har_8663]“St-stoooppp!”[np]
;;[nm t="ハル" s=har_8663]“や、やめろぉっ!”[np]

; ※追加部分

@ev storage=ev_other_06

[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_20000]“Oooh, oooh, your hair's still as long as I remember it to be.”[np]
;;[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_20000]“おーおー、相変わらずロングすぎる髪ねえ”[np]
[nm t="ハル" s=har_20000]“D-don't touch my hair!”[np]
;;[nm t="ハル" s=har_20000]“さ、触るなー!”[np]
[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_20001]“What, you don't like it?”[np]
;;[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_20001]“なに、嫌なの?”[np]
[nm t="ハル" s=har_20001]“No, frankly, I don't!”[np]
;;[nm t="ハル" s=har_20001]“嫌に決まってるだろー!”[np]
[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_20002]“Very well... then how about your boobs?”[np]
;;[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_20002]“なら、おっぱいならいいの?”[np]
[nm t="ハル" s=har_20002]“That's way worse!”[np]
;;[nm t="ハル" s=har_20002]“それが一番ダメだ!”[np]
[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_20003]“You're so cruel, Haru. What could have possibly come between us? You loved me once, didn't you?”[np]
;;[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_20003]“ひどいじゃないの。なにがあったの? 前は私のこと大好きだったじゃない?”[np]
[nm t="ハル" s=har_20003]“...Uhhh, well...”[np]
;;[nm t="ハル" s=har_20003]“……うぅ、だってぇ……”[np]
[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_20004]“You've got a better rack than me. What are you so upset for?”[np]
;;[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_20004]“あなたはわたしよりいい胸を持っているのに、なにが不満なの?”[np]
[nm t="ハル" s=har_20004]“...I'm not, but-”[np]
;;[nm t="ハル" s=har_20004]“……不満はない、けど”[np]
[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_20005]“You brought it up first, didn't you? ‘I'm a hero. You can be my comrade,’ remember?”[np]
;;[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_20005]“あなたが言ったんじゃない? 『わたしは勇者だ。お前を仲間にしてやろう』って”[np]
[nm t="ハル" s=har_20005]“Uh, yeah, b-but... I, I don't see how that gives you the right to start sexually harassing me...”[np]
;;[nm t="ハル" s=har_20005]“あ、うん……で、でもこんなセクハラしてくるなんて……”[np]
[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_20006]“Do you hate me?”[np]
;;[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_20006]“私のこと嫌い?”[np]
[nm t="ハル" s=har_20006]“N-no, I don't hate you...”[np]
;;[nm t="ハル" s=har_20006]“き、嫌いじゃないよ……”[np]
[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_20007]“That's right, you even got me a birthday present and everything.”[np]
;;[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_20007]“そうよね。お誕生日プレゼントくれたもんね”[np]
[nm t="ハル" s=har_20007]“Yeah... and we went to the aquarium together...”[np]
;;[nm t="ハル" s=har_20007]“うん……いっしょに、水族館も行った……”[np]
[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_20008]“Good times.”[np]
;;[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_20008]“そうでしょう”[np]
[nm t="ハル" s=har_20008]“And you treated me to food an awful lot...”[np]
;;[nm t="ハル" s=har_20008]“ご飯も、たくさんおごってくれた……”[np]
[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_20009]“I'm so glad you remember! Now, say it.”[np]
;;[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_20009]“そうでしょうそうでしょう。じゃあ、言ってみて”[np]
[nm t="ハル" s=har_20009]“I-I love you, Yuki. I can't lie to myself anymore.”[np]
;;[nm t="ハル" s=har_20009]“わ、わたしは、ユキが大好き。うん、間違いない”[np]
...Is she being brainwashed?[np]
[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_20010]“It makes me so happy to hear you say that... let's not fight again, Haru.”[np]
;;[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_20010]“うれしいわね。なら、仲良くしましょう?”[np]
[nm t="ハル" s=har_20010]“Haaah...”[np]
;;[nm t="ハル" s=har_20010]“くぅぅ……”[np]

; ※追加終了

They seemed to be having fun.[np]


Class shortly ended, and Usami got up from her seat.[np]

@bg storage=bg_05a rule=rule_k_r time=1000

@camera angle=l
@chr c=haru_a_se_05_s ll=yuki_a_se_01b_s
[nm t="ハル" s=har_8664]“Yuki, what are you doing here?”[np]
;;[nm t="ハル" s=har_8664]“ユキ、なにしに来たんだ?”[np]

@chr ll=yuki_a_se_09b_s
[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7180]“Hmm?”[np]
;;[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7180]“え?”[np]

@chr c=haru_a_se_09_s
[nm t="ハル" s=har_8665]“Why did you move here?”[np]
;;[nm t="ハル" s=har_8665]“なぜ、引っ越してきたんだ?”[np]

@chr ll=yuki_a_se_07b_s
[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7181]“To be with you, of course.”[np]
;;[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7181]“ハルに会うためよ”[np]

@chr c=haru_a_se_08_s
[nm t="ハル" s=har_8666]“If that were the case, then you should have contacted me. Or at least answered my calls.”[np]
;;[nm t="ハル" s=har_8666]“それなら連絡くらいしてよ。こっちからかけてもつながらないし”[np]

@chr ll=yuki_a_se_03b_s
[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7182]“I'm sorry, I was just so caught up in moving... you understand.”[np]
;;[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7182]“ごめんね。引越しの準備で忙しかったの”[np]

@chr c=haru_a_se_14b_s
[nm t="ハル" s=har_8667]“Oh, please...”[np]
;;[nm t="ハル" s=har_8667]“まったくもう……”[np]
;;I edited this whole next sequence based on the assumption that Haru is suspicious of Yuki and that's the driving force of the conversation. - pondr
;;Well, there's nothing to imply suspicion here so no.

Usami's cheeks puffed out in annoyance.[np]

For the first time, I felt that she looked like a normal schoolgirl.[np]

@chr ll=yuki_a_se_04_s
[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7183]“Calm down, Haru. Let's just try to have a little fun.”[np]
;;[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7183]“改めてよろしくね”[np]
;;Had no idea what the context of the "yoroshiku" was, so I assumed this based on the above note. Had an inkling that it might be ye olde "I'm counting on you" though. - pondr
;;or "trust me", but that calls Yuki into suspicion even more than the actual lines do. - pondr
;;it's just a generic yoroshiku, like, take care of me or whatever. I probably should have attempted it but being the lazy bastard i am i thought fuck it you know what yoroshiku means, you do it. fuck japanese polite untranslatable crap - chikan

@chr c=haru_a_se_03_s
[nm t="ハル" s=har_8668]“Fine... but I...”[np]
;;[nm t="ハル" s=har_8668]“うん……ただ、わたしは……”[np]

@chr ll=yuki_a_se_06_s
[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7184]“I know. You're still after that ‘Maou’ guy, right? That's what the thing the other day was about.”[np]
;;[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7184]“知ってるわ。"魔王"、まだ追ってるんでしょう? この前の事件もその一環?”[np]

The two of them upheld a conversation that only they could have understood.[np]

@chr c=haru_a_se_01_s
[nm t="ハル" s=har_8669]“Anyway, I've gotta go.”[np]
;;[nm t="ハル" s=har_8669]“それじゃあ、わたしは帰る”[np]

@chr ll=yuki_a_se_04_s
[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7185]“Yeah, good luck at work today.”[np]
;;[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7185]“ええ、バイトがんばってね”[np]

@chr c=haru_d_se_04_s
[nm t="ハル" s=har_8670]“......”[np]
;;[nm t="ハル" s=har_8670]“…………”[np]
@dellay pos=c

Wearing an assured smile that she only showed her friends, Usami left.[np]

@chr c=eiichi_a_se_01b_s
[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7538]“Hey, Yuki-san.”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7538]“ねえねえ、ユキさん”[np]

@chr ll=yuki_a_se_09b_s
Eiichi immediately filled in the vacancy in an attempt to butter up Yuki.[np]

[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7539]“That's Shiratori-san over there.”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7539]“あの子が、白鳥さんだよ?”[np]

@camera angle=r
@chr rr=mizuha_a_se_05_s
Shiratori was about to walk out the door, but after hearing Eiichi's voice, she looked this way.[np]

@chr ll=yuki_b_se_01_s
[nm t="ユキ"]“......”[np]
;;[nm t="ユキ"]“…………”[np]

Tokita looked her up and down for a moment, then lightly nodded in greeting.[np]

[nm t="水羽" s=miz_7045]“......”[np]
;;[nm t="水羽" s=miz_7045]“…………”[np]

Shiratori volleyed an icy stare.[np]

@chr c=eiichi_a_se_01c_s
[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7540]“Hey, Shiratori-san, come here for a second!”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7540]“ねえ、白鳥さん、ちょっとおいでよ”[np]

@camera angle=c
@chr_pos_change before=rr after=r
Shiratori glanced at me and walked over with a sour expression.[np]

@chr r=mizuha_b_se_05_s
[nm t="水羽" s=miz_7046]“What?”[np]
;;[nm t="水羽" s=miz_7046]“なに?”[np]

@chr_pos_change before=ll after=l
@chr l=yuki_b_se_01_s
[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7187]“Hello, are you Shiratori-san?”[np]
;;[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7187]“こんにちは、あなたが白鳥さん?”[np]

@chr r=mizuha_b_se_06c_s
[nm t="水羽" s=miz_7047]“Like I said, what?”[np]
;;[nm t="水羽" s=miz_7047]“だったら、なに?”[np]

@chr c=eiichi_a_se_08b_s
[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7541]“(Looks like Princess is as snappy as ever.)”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7541]“(相変わらずトゲトゲしいな)”[np]

[nm t="京介"]“(I know, right?)”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“(まったくだ)”[np]

The two of us were communicating telepathically like the characters in some Stephen King movie.[np]
;;something tells me this is a reference to some obscure j-horror movie, so I figured I'd adapt (dreamcatcher is what I'm referencing here) - pondr

@chr l=yuki_a_se_07b_s
[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7188]“I'm sorry, were you in a hurry?”[np]
;;[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7188]“ごめんなさい。忙しかった?”[np]

Shiratori shook her head silently.[np]

@chr r=mizuha_b_se_02b_s
[nm t="水羽" s=miz_7048]“I recommend keeping your distance from Azai-kun.”[np]
;;[nm t="水羽" s=miz_7048]“浅井くんには近づかないほうがいいと思う”[np]

@chr c=eiichi_a_se_06_s
[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7542]“(What the hell did you do to her, Bro?)”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7542]“(おいおい、お前なんかしたのかよ?)”[np]

[nm t="京介"]“(I didn't do anything. The girl's just got a few screws loose, you know that.)”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“(ぜんぜんノータッチな。頭おかしいんだよ、こいつは)”[np]

@chr l=yuki_a_se_09b_s
[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7189]“Why, pray tell, should I do so?”[np]
;;[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7189]“それは、どうして?”[np]

@chr r=mizuha_b_se_02_s
[nm t="水羽" s=miz_7049]“He's two-faced.”[np]
;;[nm t="水羽" s=miz_7049]“裏表がある人だから”[np]

@chr l=yuki_a_se_09_s
[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7190]“Really, now? That's quite frightening.”[np]
;;[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7190]“そう。怖いわね”[np]

@chr r=mizuha_b_se_06_s
[nm t="水羽" s=miz_7050]“Aizawa-kun is too.”[np]
;;[nm t="水羽" s=miz_7050]“相沢くんもそう”[np]

@chr c=eiichi_a_se_08b_s
[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7543]“Who? Me?”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7543]“え? ボク?”[np]

@chr r=mizuha_b_se_06b_s
[nm t="水羽" s=miz_7051]“He pretends to be cute and innocent, but he's not.”[np]
;;[nm t="水羽" s=miz_7051]“かわい子ぶってるけど、本当は違うの”[np]
;;I've made a decision! Yuki and Mizuha will both speak with nice proper english, but mizuha will prioritize having short, to-the-point lines while Yuki will keep talking when necessary. Yuki will also, of course, adapt to the situation (as a negotiator, this is critical), so she won't always speak ultra-proper. - pondr

@chr c=eiichi_a_se_10_s
[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7544]“H-hey, hold on a damn second, stop that!”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7544]“ちょ、ちょっとちょっと、なにさ、やめてよ!”[np]

@chr r=mizuha_b_se_02c_s
[nm t="水羽" s=miz_7052]“Well it's true, isn't it? A few weeks ago, you sneaked into the faculty office to change your test scores.”[np]
;;[nm t="水羽" s=miz_7052]“本当のことでしょう? この前だって、職員室に忍び込んでテストの答案書き直したじゃない?”[np]
;;I cringe when I write sneaked. And I'd normally use snuck anyway, even though it's wrong... but I can't do it for mizuha... - pondr

@chr c=eiichi_a_se_11d_s
@chr_jump pos=c
[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7545]“Th-that's totally not true!”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7545]“そ、そんなことはなかった!”[np]
;;I'm not sure about using total bullshit for Eiichi when he's trying to DEFEND his innocent image(at least not without someone commenting that he just broke it)
;;I guess good point about the no comment about breaking it. Though the voice file isn't so sweet. - pondr

@chr r=mizuha_b_se_13_s
[nm t="水羽" s=miz_7053]“You tell girls you're a poor orphan, but your father owns a few high class hotels.”[np]
;;[nm t="水羽" s=miz_7053]“施設で育ったとか女の子に言ってるけど、お父さんはホテルのオーナーでしょう?”[np]

So Shiratori knows too.[np]

@chr c=eiichi_b_se_02_s
[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7546]“Ack...!”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7546]“くぅぅ……!”[np]

@chr l=yuki_a_se_09c_s
Tokita put on a surprised face.[np]

[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7191]“No... is this true, Eiichi-kun?”[np]
;;[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7191]“あら、そうなの? 栄一くん?”[np]

@chr c=eiichi_a_se_10_s
[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7547]“O-of, of course not! You gotta believe me!”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7547]“ち、違うよ、違うよ! ボクを信じて!”[np]

@chr r=mizuha_b_se_02_s
[nm t="水羽" s=miz_7054]“Just thought I'd warn you.”[np]
;;[nm t="水羽" s=miz_7054]“とにかく、そういうことだから”[np]

@chr c=eiichi_a_se_11b_s
@chr l=yuki_a_se_08b_s
[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7192]“May I infer from this that you despise two-faced people?”[np]
;;[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7192]“なるほど、あなたは裏表がある人が大嫌いなのね”[np]

@chr r=mizuha_b_se_06c_s
[nm t="水羽" s=miz_7055]“Who doesn't?”[np]
;;[nm t="水羽" s=miz_7055]“好きな人なんている?”[np]

@chr l=yuki_a_se_01_s
[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7193]“Ah, but surely even you aren't this glacial young woman all the time, correct?”[np]
;;[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7193]“でも、あなただって、いつもそうやってしかめ面してるわけじゃないんでしょう?”[np]
;oh, the irony!
;;I probably messed up a later line by taking away frowning, but I'll deal with it when I have to. - pondr

@chr r=mizuha_b_se_02b_s
[nm t="水羽" s=miz_7056]“......”[np]
;;[nm t="水羽" s=miz_7056]“…………”[np]

@chr l=yuki_c_se_01_s
[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7194]“Haha... I apologize. I've got things to do, so I'll be leaving now. Let's chat again soon.”[np]
;;[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7194]“ふふ……ごめんなさい。用があるから、今日は帰るわ。またお話しましょう”[np]
;;hm. pretty good line out of TL! - pondr

@chr c=eiichi_a_se_10_s
[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7548]“Ah, Yuki-san...! Want to go eat some sweets or someth-!?”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7548]“あ、ユキさん……これからスウィーツでも食べに……!”[np]

Eiichi started after her.[np]

@chr l=yuki_c_se_04d_s
[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7195]“Goodbye, Eiichi-kun.”[np]
;;[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7195]“じゃあね、栄一くん”[np]
@dellay pos=l

Tokita quickly left, leaving Eiichi stopped in his tracks.[np]

Shiratori was glaring at her receding figure hatefully.[np]

@chr r=mizuha_b_se_06b_s
[nm t="水羽" s=miz_7057]“...I am too this way all the time...”[np]
;;[nm t="水羽" s=miz_7057]“……いつも、よ”[np]
;;line is ambiguous what's always going on, so might as well let it be ambiguous. I mean, she's talking to herself. - pondr
;;it's clearly a reference to line 221, and it's weird having her refer to herself as "it"
;;OH yeah that was TOTALLY not clear to me. I thought she was upset that she always tsuns everything up like the idiot she is. - pondr

@chr r=mizuha_a_se_06b_s
@camera angle=r
@dellay_walk pos=r
After that soft mutter, as if to chase after Tokita, Shiratori also left the classroom.[np]

@camera angle=c
@chr c=eiichi_b_se_02_s
Eiichi, who'd been left behind, began to tremble.[np]

[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7549]“I-I was so close... so close...!”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7549]“あ、あと一歩……あと一歩のところで……!”[np]

...He was so close, apparently.[np]

[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7550]“...Goddammit... GODDAMMIT!”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7550]“……ちくしょう……ちくしょおおおお!”[np]

@chr c=eiichi_b_se_16_b
@quake sx=3 sy=15 xcnt=3 ycnt=2 time=300
Eiichi promptly dragged me away.[np]
;;to violate me in rage - kyousuke/pondr

@black rule=rule_i_l time=1000



@ev storage=ev_maou_02
@bgm storage=bgm_103

[nm t="京介"]“So, we're back at this again?”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“で、またこの展開なわけだな?”[np]

@mface name=eiichi_b_se_02_b
[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7551]“I can't let it slide this time, Lord, I swear to GOD!”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7551]“マジ許せねえっすよ、神、マジで!”[np]

[nm t="京介"]“I know, I know. Shiratori Mizuha, right?”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“わかったわかった。白鳥水羽だな?”[np]

[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7552]“SMITE HER! Grant her a shameful, agonizing death! Make it look like she died in a car accident on the way home from buying buttloads of porn.”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7552]“死を与えましょう。なんかもうすごい死を。エロ本買った帰りに事故死みたいな”[np]

[nm t="京介"]“Hmm... I suppose Shiratori [ font italic="true" ]is[ resetfont ] a foolish heretic who repeatedly stands against the will of the Lord...”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“うーむ……たしかになー、白鳥は神にたてつく愚か者ではあるが……”[np]

@mface name=eiichi_b_se_01_b
[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7553]“Yeah, she's a damned heretic!”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7553]“ですよねー”[np]

[nm t="京介"]“But honestly, this is completely trivial.”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“ぶっちゃけ、どうでもいいっちゃ、どうでもいい”[np]
;;kyousuke saying bro rubs me the wrong way, just me? - chikan
;;then prepare to be rubbed man, I did it all the way through. He's a prick anyway, it fits. I mean, it's not like he says it in romantic situations. - pondr

@mface name=eiichi_b_se_18_b
@quake pos= sx=5 sy=3 xcnt=3 ycnt=2 time=300 fade=true
[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7554]“Trivial my fucking ass!”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7554]“どうでもよかーねえんすよ!”[np]

[nm t="京介"]“G-get out of my face, man...”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“ちょ、ちょっと近い、顔ちかいっての”[np]

@mface name=eiichi_b_se_02_b
[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7555]“I need one of your brilliant plans, God!”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7555]“なんか策をくださいよ!”[np]

[nm t="京介"]“Huh?”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“えー”[np]

@mface name=eiichi_b_se_16_b
[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7556]“Don't ‘Huh?’ me!”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7556]“えー、じゃない!”[np]

[nm t="京介"]“Ah?”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“あー”[np]

[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7557]“Screw you and your sound effects! Why the hell are you pretending to be innocent!?”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7557]“あー、じゃない! なにかわい子ぶってんだ!”[np]

[nm t="京介"]“Look, Eiichi... no matter how good of a plan I come up with, you'll just ruin it.”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“つーか、どんだけ完璧な策を立てても、どうせお前がやらかしてくれるじゃん”[np]

@mface name=eiichi_b_se_02_b
[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7558]“I swear I won't this time! I mean, have you ever seen me this angry!?”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7558]“今度はだいじょぶだって! これほど激しい怒りを見せたオレを見たことがあるか!?”[np]

[nm t="京介"]“Pretty often, yeah.”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“けっこうあるね”[np]

@mface name=eiichi_b_se_18_b
[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7559]“I said I won't fucking ruin it, so out with it already!”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7559]“ぜったい、だいじょぶだと何回言わせるんだ!”[np]

[nm t="京介"]“Every goddamn time you say you won't ruin something, you screw it over royally. It's practically become a comedy routine at this point.”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“いやそれ、ぜったいフリだから。やらかしますよーっていう、前フリだから”[np]

[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7560]“Fine, to hell with it! God is dead!”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7560]“もういい、神は死んだ!”[np]

;背景 廊下 夕方
@black time=1000
@bg storage=bg_04b rule=rule_i_l time=1000

@chr c=eiichi_b_se_02_b
[nm t="京介"]“Alright, I'm headed to buy that CD.”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“さあて、CD買いに行こうかな”[np]

[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7561]“What the shit, how can you look so happy when I'm hurting over here!?”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7561]“くそ、なにほくほく顔ぶっこいてんだ!?”[np]

[nm t="京介"]“I've been over this a thousand times with you, man. That new Wagner CD comes out today! I've been waiting forever for this! You watched Kanon's performance, you should know how fantastic the guy is.”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“だって、今日がなんの日かわかるか? 待ちに待ったワーグナーだぞ? お前も花音の演技を見て、ワーグナーの良さはわかっただろ?”[np]

[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7562]“Eugh, shut up, you damn nerd.”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7562]“うるせえキモオタだなあ”[np]

[nm t="京介"]“Heh. See ya, man. Remember, revenge is bad.”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“じゃあな。復讐はいかんよ、復讐は”[np]

@chr c=eiichi_b_se_03_b
[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7563]“Yeah, fuck you too...”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7563]“くそう……”[np]

I left Eiichi behind and set off to enjoy my free time.[np]

;背景 繁華街1 夜
@black rule=rule_i_r time=1000
@wait time=1000
@bg storage=bg_09c rule=rule_i_r time=1000
@bgm storage=bgm_06

@chr c=haru_c_se_00_s
[nm t="京介"]“Hey, what's up, Usami? Did you just finish working?”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“よう、宇佐美じゃないか。バイト終わりか?”[np]

@chr c=haru_c_se_01_b
[nm t="ハル" s=har_8671]“You look pretty happy, Azai-san. Did something happen?”[np]
;;[nm t="ハル" s=har_8671]“浅井さんこそ、なにやらうれしそうですね?”[np]

[nm t="京介"]“Did something happen, you ask? Well, if you are so interested, let me tell you... I picked up some Wagner today.”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“いやいや、わかるだろ? 今日はワーグナーが手に入ったんだ”[np]
;;I felt "my friend" was really out of place coming from kyousuke. izmos

@chr c=haru_c_se_03_b
[nm t="ハル" s=har_8672]“I, uh... cool...”[np]
;;[nm t="ハル" s=har_8672]“は、はあ……”[np]
;;I envisioned megan fox in transformers when the dude flips over on a girl's bike and she says, "that's, uh... that's really cool." - pondr

[nm t="京介"]“Goodness gracious, though... I can't believe I only pre-ordered one copy. I had to run all around downtown to snag a second.”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“しかし、おれとしたことがよー、一枚しか予約してなかったんだなー。だから、ほかの店探し回ってようやく二枚目ゲットよ”[np]
;;I don't know if this was my screwup or the original chinese TL, but he's referring to himself, that he only preordered one CD. -chikan
;;I figure he gets kinda cute and innocent comparatively in classical music mode. - pondr

@chr c=haru_c_se_01_b
[nm t="ハル" s=har_8673]“You seem like a completely different person when talking about classical music, Azai-san.”[np]
;;[nm t="ハル" s=har_8673]“浅井さんはクラシックのことになると、まるで人が変わりますよね”[np]

[nm t="京介"]“Mm. Anyway, I'm going home to take care of some work. I'll set my CD aside for a day, then finally listen to it tomorrow.”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“まあ、これから帰って仕事を片づけて、一日寝かして、ようやく聞けるわけだが”[np]

@chr c=haru_c_se_00_b
[nm t="ハル" s=har_8674]“Do you really love classical music that much?”[np]
;;[nm t="ハル" s=har_8674]“そんなに好きなんすか?”[np]

[nm t="京介"]“If I hadn't met classical music, I'd have become a criminal.”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“クラシックと出会わなかったら、犯罪者になってたよ”[np]

[nm t="ハル" s=har_8675]“You sound like a religious fanatic.”[np]
;;[nm t="ハル" s=har_8675]“むしろデス信者っぽいこと言ってますが?”[np]

[nm t="京介"]“Oh, you have no idea. I've been so busy lately that I haven't even had time to go to concerts!”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“最近は忙しくて、ぜんぜん生で聞きに行けないからなー”[np]

[nm t="ハル" s=har_8676]“So you prefer live performances?”[np]
;;[nm t="ハル" s=har_8676]“やっぱ、生派すか?”[np]

[nm t="京介"]“Yeah, especially violin solos. Having a real performer play for you is just so much more... well, real. You know what I mean?”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“とくにヴァイオリンなんかはな、如実に出るじゃん。違いが”[np]

@chr c=haru_c_se_01_b
[nm t="ハル" s=har_8677]“...I... I guess so.”[np]
;;[nm t="ハル" s=har_8677]“……です、ね”[np]

[nm t="京介"]“What, are you a fan too?”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“なんだよ、お前も聞くのか?”[np]

[nm t="ハル" s=har_8678]“Nah.”[np]
;;[nm t="ハル" s=har_8678]“いえいえ”[np]

[nm t="京介"]“Well, I've got to go. See you tomorrow.”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“まあいい、じゃあ、明日な”[np]

@chr c=haru_c_se_00_s
[nm t="ハル" s=har_8679]“Oh, Azai-san... are you going to bring that CD to school tomorrow?”[np]
;;[nm t="ハル" s=har_8679]“あ、浅井さん、明日もそのCDは学園に持ってくるんすか?”[np]

[nm t="京介"]“Of course. Even I don't have the willpower to leave it at home when I set it aside for a day.”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“当然だろ、一日寝かしてなんぼなんだよ”[np]

[nm t="ハル" s=har_8680]“......”[np]
;;[nm t="ハル" s=har_8680]“…………”[np]

[nm t="京介"]“Alright, see ya. Try to get along with Tokita.”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“じゃあなー、時田と仲良くしろよー”[np]

I waved and left.[np]

[nm t="ハル" s=har_8681]“......”[np]
;;[nm t="ハル" s=har_8681]“…………”[np]

[nm t="ハル" s=har_8682]“...Hopefully Wagner will fare better than Bach did...”[np]
;;[nm t="ハル" s=har_8682]“……これは、壮絶な前フリでは……?”[np]
;;This is Haru commenting on how that conversation with Kyosuke is like, foreshadowing. It's a reference to(what I coincidentally TLCed just yesterday) the scene where Kyosuke was looking forward to the CD and then brought it to the school and it got broken back in chapter 1. The translation here is just... completely made up bullshit, I don't know what it is.
;;something like this? - pondr
;;The original is a common Japanese sketch comedy term(Basically the set up to a sketch. Like, you have someone like there's a button here, but someone's like don't press it man. WHATEVER YOU DO MAKE SURE YOU DON'T PRESS IT! That's a 前フリ for "Man, you know what's going to happen, that dude's totally going to press it) so there's no way to get a direct translation, the best you can do is bullshit it so yeah, that's fine.(FYI it's appeared like 6 times in the script so far already and has been similarly bullshitted each time)

@black rule=rule_h_b time=1000



@wait time=1000
@ev storage=ev_haru_02
@wait time=1000
@addimg layer=4 storage=cp_title04
@wait time=1000
@black time=1000
@wait time=1000

@wait time=500
@ev storage=ev_chapter_04
@wait time=4000
@wait time=500
@jump storage="g38.ks"