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*page1|
...[np]
;;……。[np]

*page2|
......[np]
;;…………。[np]

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*page3|
Kanon's fears materialized into reality.[np]
;;花音の不安は、現実のものとなって現れた。[np]

*page4|
It's the first day of the Japan Championships' ladies' events.[np]
;;全国大会、女子フィギュアスケートの初日。[np]

*page5|
Kanon's short program was scheduled directly following Seta's.[np]
;;ショートプログラムの行程は、瀬田のあとに花音が滑るという順序で進んだ。[np]

*page6|
Seta's performance was tremendous.[np]
;;瀬田の勢いはすさまじいものがあった。[np]

*page7|
The more applause she received, the higher her score would be... and the arena's furor was deafening.[np]
;;拍手の量が増えれば、得点も伸びる。[np]

*page8|
She received the highest score in the Japan Championships' history, and swept the audience up into a whirlpool of excitement.[np]
;;全国大会史上初の最高得点をたたき出し、観客を感動の渦に巻き込んだ。[np]

*page9|
She didn't rely solely on her trademark step sequences. She attempted the difficult jumps that Kanon specialized in, and pulled them off magnificently.[np]
;;定評のあるステップだけではなく、花音が得意技とするような難度の高いジャンプも取り入れ、見事成功させた。[np]

*page10|
At the end of her performance, I involuntarily stood up and clapped with raging emotion.[np]
;;演技終了後には、おれも思わず立ち上がり、手を叩いていた。[np]

*page11|
How could Kanon feel as she stepped into the rink, watching this new Seta in the kiss-and-cry?[np]
;;花音は、そんな瀬田を前にどんな気持ちで氷上に現れたのか。[np]

*page12|
The applause that thundered in the arena was no longer directed at Kanon.[np]
;;あの、会場の空気がぶれるような拍手は、もう花音に送られなかった。[np]

*page13|
Everyone has taken up the bad image forced upon her by the press.[np]
;;誰もが、連日のように報道された負のイメージを刷り込まれただろう。[np]

*page14|
There were no boos or scoffs, of course, but the difference from last time was obvious.[np]
;;大きな罵声やはっきりとした嘲笑は聞こえない。[np]

*page15|
They chose instead to ridicule her with half-hearted applause, crossed legs, and a symphony of coughs and cleared throats.[np]
;;皆、おざなりに手を叩き、足を組み、咳払いを重ね、日本人らしい奥ゆかしい差別のやり方で、問題児を上から見下ろしていた。[np]
;;Befitting here is very generous. It was originally "in a manner very much like the japanese."
;;...sounds the same to me... - pondr, qc run

*page15b|
Everyone looked down upon her with discriminatory gazes, showing their distaste in a manner befitting the Japanese.[np]

*page16|
Had she caught on to the tainted atmosphere? Kanon's performance lacked spirit.[np]
;;悪い空気は伝染するのか、花音の演技は精彩を欠いていた。[np]

*page17|
At least, that's how I saw it, and I'm sure the spectators and judges would agree.[np]
;;少なくともおれにはそう見えてしまうし、きっと観客や審判の目にもそう映っていることだろう。[np]

*page18|
[nm t="客1" s=ky1_7000]“She's hopeless...”[np]
;;[nm t="客1" s=ky1_7000]“ダメだな……”[np]

*page19|
The man in the seat next to me didn't even wait until Kanon had finished to mutter his opinion.[np]
;;演技中にもかかわらず、隣の席の男がぼそりと漏らした。[np]
;;voice check for gender, qc'ers.
;;the gender of the "man" is presumably male, shouldn't be needed - chikan

*page20|
Though I didn't like it, I had to agree.[np]
;;不快に思いながらも、納得させられるものはあった。[np]

*page21|
It's true that she's lacking in vigor.[np]
;;たしかに、勢いがない。[np]

*page22|
What happened to her bullet-like speed?[np]
;;弾丸の速度はどこへやら。[np]

*page23|
Her once magnificent jumps now looked as though they were just barely avoiding being marked as under-rotated.[np]
;;天馬さながらのジャンプは、なんとか目標の回転数を維持したという程度だった。[np]
;;天馬さながら? cough, *ignore* >_> <_< I'm guessing it's just some kind of metaphor for being in the air or something(since the spins for jumps do occur on the air) - tna
;;Is it worth persisting, or should we just drop it?
;;This is a little ludicrous for skating terminology... but it's not too bad. And I think overall the line is trying to say something like she's almost getting to the point where her spins are completed on the ice (which is a penalty to the jump).

*page24|
And she calls that edgework? Her legs seemed to be moving up a storm, but to me, it looked like she was just frantically shuffling them about.[np]
;;エッジワーク……というのだろうか、忙しく足を動かしているようだが、ただ慌てているようにしか見えない。[np]
;;Edge-work, I have no idea what that is but I'm going to trust someone who knows skating has an idea I checked the figure-skating wiki and it appeared in there so that's gotta be worth something - tna
;;Chris. This is all you.
;;should be all - pondr (Chris)

*page25|
Maybe she ran out of stamina. During her final jump, a pained expression was plastered on the arena's jumbotron.[np]
;;スタミナが切れたのか、ラスト間際のスピンの最中には、スクリーンに苦しそうな表情が映ってしまった。[np]

*page26|
When the song finished, a few scattered claps decorated the silence of the arena.[np]
;;曲が終わり、フィニッシュを決めた花音に、ばらついた拍手が送られた。[np]

*page27|
But not a single person rose.[np]
;;席を立つ者など一人も見当たらなかった。[np]
;;"Nary" is a little much. The language is distracting from the content.

*page28|
There were no penalties to speak of, but the performance bore none of Kanon's unique charm, the charm that would usually shake one to his or her core.[np]
;;はっきりとした減点はなさそうだったが、これまで背すじを震わせられたような、花音にしかない魅力はまったく伝わってこなかった。[np]
;;Generous editing, original: the charm that would normally send shivers down your spine. Noting for good measure
;;"one" and "their" were too close to use that particular (acceptable, and even preferred at times, but actually) incorrect grammar.

*page29|
Her program was designed as innately high-scoring, so she managed to get second place, but there was more than a fifteen point difference between her and the leader, Seta.[np]
;;花音のプログラムは、もともとの配点が高いようで、結果は暫定二位ではあるが、一位の瀬田と十五点以上もの大差がついた。[np]

*page30|
As it stands, even a layman would call Worlds a long shot for Kanon.[np]
;;もはや、世界大会は遠くなったと言わざるを得ない。[np]
;;QC's take note that this line is still a bit awkward.

*page31|
Participation at Worlds may be formally decided by the results of the Japan Championships, but they also take into account the scores of the Grand Prix of Figure Skating Finals.[np]
;;全国大会での結果で決めるとはいえ、世界大会の選考は、ファイナルの成績も考慮するという話だ。[np]
;;Looking through the scripts, it would seem Final is short for Grand Prix Final here(the one that Kanon fell on her ass) so fixed. Should really figure out what the hell is going in the game before I do this stuff huh.
;;Finals is just peachy. I only occasionally (usually when he's talking about a lot of different competitions, like here) add in the "Grand Prix [of Figure Skating]" part.

*page31eng|
As the loser of the Finals, Kanon would need a combined score this time around that beats Seta's by a hefty amount.[np]
;;BIG NOTE: I totally added this line because the current page31 didn't remind the audience of what the line was here to remind us of. - pondr
;;I hope I haven't forgotten any other [np]'s O.O (besides one in gk10 I've already mentally noted and will fix when I get there) thanks chikan - pondr

*page32|
It's highly unlikely Kanon will be able to compensate for both the Finals and today by trouncing Seta during tomorrow's free skate.[np]
;;花音が、明日のフリーで瀬田の合計点を大幅に上回る可能性は常識的に考えられない。[np]
;;And fixed this one to make it all flow. I know, you're thinking "wtf?", but read the lines now and think about it.

*page33|
In fact, she'll have her hands full just beating Seta at all.[np]
;;それどころか、明日、瀬田に勝つことすら厳しすぎる。[np]
;;Presumably this means the free skate, but it could mean the Japan Championships. Either way, the above adaptation makes it more clear.

*page34|
Just looking at Seta's technical score was enough to make my stomach turn.[np]
;;瀬田の技術点を見て胃が痛くなりそうだった[np]
;;Don't know what the official name for technical points are, sue me.
;;well, good guess then.

*page35|
The technical score basically represents how well one executed difficult step sequences, jumps, and other elements.[np]
;;技術点は、つまり、どれだけ難度の高いジャンプやステップを上手に見せたかで、配点が決まる。[np]
;;Chris. This line is unedited. I entrust it to you.
;;glad I got all this skating stuff out of the way the first time, I forgot most of it... but I think the two big divisions are technical and performance/execution. - pondr

*page36|
Up until now, everyone had predicted that Kanon would hold a monstrous lead with respect to technical marks.[np]
;;これまで、技術においては、花音が大きく差をつけていると思われていた。[np]
;;Same here.

*page37|
But in reality, the difference wasn't so overwhelming.[np]
;;しかし、実際は、ほとんど変わらなかった。[np]
;;Can I get a hyper literal TLC? Or is it just "It doesn't really matter" or "It doesn't make a bit of difference"
;;gk10 mentions that Seta's technical score came out of nowhere and was almost equal to Kanon's, so I presume this was right.

*page38|
Had Seta sincerely displayed some phenomenal growth, or had the judges handed down a rather lenient judgment?[np]
;;瀬田が爆発的な成長を見せたのか、ジャッジが好意的な判断を下したのか。[np]

*page39|
It was probably a combination of the two. At any rate, it was plenty enough to crush Kanon's pride and identity.[np]
;;おそらくその両方だろうが、花音の面目や個性を潰すには十分な現実を叩きつけられた。[np]

*page40|
And above all...[np]
;;なにより――、[np]


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*page41|
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7793]“Look, I've got nothing to say.”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7793]“とくに、話すことはないです”[np]

*page42|
Kanon's face was displayed on the huge screen.[np]
;;巨大スクリーンに晒された花音の顔。[np]

*page43|
Her cold expression didn't even have a trace of fighting spirit.[np]
;;冷たい表情には闘志のかけらも見出せなかった。[np]

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*page44|
Kanon was popular both on and off the ice, in a bad way.[np]
;;会場の中でも外でも、花音は悪い意味で人気者だった。[np]

*page45|
An assembly of paparazzi and reporters asked her malevolent questions, hoping that she would slip up and say something regretful.[np]
;;大勢の記者やレポーターから、失言を期待しているような悪質な質問が飛び交った。[np]

*page46|
[nm t="記者1" s=ki1_7000]“Were you even trying today?”[np]
;;[nm t="記者1" s=ki1_7000]“今回、やる気は出したんですか?”[np]

*page47|
[nm t="記者2" s=ki2_7006]“What did you think about Seta's performance?”[np]
;;[nm t="記者2" s=ki2_7006]“瀬田選手の演技はどうでしたか?”[np]

*page48|
[nm t="記者3" s=ki3_7000]“Kanon-san, please face this way. You're not a child.”[np]
;;[nm t="記者3" s=ki3_7000]“花音さん、こっち向いてくださいよ。子供じゃないんだから”[np]

*page49|
They probably figured that if Kanon wouldn't entertain their readers with her performance, then perhaps they could pull something out of her to give them a few kicks.[np]
;;彼らは、今日の花音の演技が、ありていにいえば普通だったので、なんとかして視聴者や読者の興味を引くものに変えたいのだろう。[np]


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*page50|
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7794]“......”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7794]“…………”[np]

*page51|
The crowd and dozens of blinding flashes blocked Kanon's way.[np]
;;まばゆいフラッシュと行く手を阻む人の肉圧に、花音はもみにもまれていた。[np]

*page52|
Her eyes were glued to the ground, and her gait betrayed that she was enduring pain and stress.[np]
;;じっと下を向いて、苦痛とストレスに耐えるように歩いている。[np]


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*page53|
I edged closer to Kanon, and tugged her frail hand.[np]
;;おれは花音に近づき、そのか細い手を引いた。[np]

*page54|
They redirected their cameras toward me, but I had no time for them.[np]
;;おれにもカメラが向けられるが、気にしている余裕もなかった。[np]


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*page55|
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7795]“Wait, Coach is coming.”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7795]“待って、コーチが来るから”[np]

*page56|
She whispered into my ear.[np]
;;耳元でささやくように言った。[np]

*page57|
Ikuko-san looked at the cameras shamelessly, and apologetically answered their trivial questions.[np]
;;郁子さんは、また臆面もなくカメラを見据え、申し訳なさそうなまなざしで、くだらない受け答えを繰り返していた。[np]

*page58|
[nm t="京介"]“Let's go.”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“行くぞ”[np]

*page59|
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7796]“Wait.”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7796]“待って”[np]

*page60|
[nm t="京介"]“Let's just leave her.”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“置いていこう”[np]

*page61|
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7797]“No.”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7797]“ダメ”[np]

*page62|
[nm t="京介"]“Why not?”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“なぜだ?”[np]


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*page63|
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7798]“...She said she would take me to dinner.”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7798]“……ご飯、食べに行こうって言われた”[np]

*page64|
I followed Kanon, feeling irritated.[np]
;;おれは歯がゆい思いで、花音に従った。[np]

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*page65|
Ikuko-san was in high spirits during the meal.[np]
;;食事中の郁子さんは、上機嫌だった。[np]

*page66|
What happened to the lady-like etiquette she upheld before the media?[np]
;;マスコミに向けた淑女めいた態度はどこへやら。[np]

*page67|
She revealed her true colors, and started ragging on Seta and the judges.[np]
;;ジキルとハイドも真っ青の豹変っぷりを見せ、瀬田やジャッジを痛烈に批判していた。[np]


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*page68|
[nm t="郁子" s=yuu_7115]“It's ridiculous. Kanon-chan isn't the one to blame.”[np]
;;[nm t="郁子" s=yuu_7115]“ほんと、花音ちゃんは何も悪くないのよ”[np]


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*page69|
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7799]“Mm...”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7799]“うん……”[np]
;;tna's most hated grunts for うん's. I'm leaving it here because Kanon is depressed, and depressed people grunt. - pondr

*page70|
Kanon nodded mechanically, as if Ikuko's words were going in one ear and out the other.[np]
;;右の耳から左の耳へ聞き流すように、うなずいていた。[np]


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*page71|
[nm t="郁子" s=yuu_7116]“Why is everyone so rotten these days? Don't worry about them, Kanon-chan. I, at least, understand how great you are.”[np]
;;[nm t="郁子" s=yuu_7116]“みんな、最低よね。気にしちゃダメよ。花音ちゃんの良さは、私だけはちゃんとわかってるからね”[np]
;;Ikuko doesn't say "pay heed".

*page72|
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7800]“Mm...”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7800]“うん……”[np]


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*page73|
[nm t="郁子" s=yuu_7117]“You'll have another shot tomorrow, so don't feel so down. All you have to do is win, and your mother will handle the rest. I'll make sure you make it big.”[np]
;;[nm t="郁子" s=yuu_7117]“まだ明日があるんだから、落ち込まないでね。優勝さえすれば、あとはお母さんに任せなさい。必ず世界に行けるようにしてあげるから”[np]

*page74|
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7801]“Mm...”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7801]“うん……”[np]

*page75|
My stomach churns from the nausea.[np]
;;不快感に胃に入ったものを戻しそうになった。[np]

*page76|
Ikuko maintains this big smile, like it's carved into her face, and clings onto her daughter.[np]
;;刻まれたような深い笑みを絶やさず、娘にすがる母。[np]

*page77|
With a face as emotionless as a porcelain doll, Kanon accompanied her mother.[np]
;;能面のように無表情な顔で、母につき従うしかなかった娘。[np]
;;Porcelain doll used in place of Noh Mask.


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*page78|
As I began to feel a bit dizzy, a bizarre circumstance presented itself.[np]
;;目まいをおぼえたそのとき、おかしなことが起きた。[np]

*page79|
The two of them went on ahead out of the alleyway, and headed toward the sidewalk on the other side of the street.[np]
;;前を行く二人が路地を抜け、大通りに抜ける歩道を行った。[np]

*page80|
The traffic light turned green.[np]
;;信号が青に変わる。[np]

*page81|
They began to cross the empty intersection.[np]
;;人通りのまばらな交差点に足を踏み入れた。[np]

*page82|
On the right hand side, I saw a dark shadow approach.[np]
;;右手に黒い影が見えた。[np]

*page83|
Ikuko-san faced it.[np]
;;郁子さんがそちらに顔を向けた。[np]

*page84|
Watch out![np]
;;危ない![np]

*page85|
Was I the one who shouted that?[np]
;;おれが叫んだのか。[np]
;;...Like I said, "Who shouted? Kyousuke shouted. Kyousuke is the subject. Don't use ‘whom'."

*page86|
Or was it Ikuko-san who shouted it? The one who got run over?[np]
;;はたまた、撥ねられた郁子さんが叫んだのか。[np]

*page87|
The driver of the sports car was conversing with a woman in the passenger seat, and ran through the red light.[np]
;;スポーツカーの運転手は、助手席の女性とおしゃべりしながら、赤信号を突っ込んできたのだった。[np]

*page88|
The grinding sound of the brakes snapped me out of my daze.[np]
;;ブレーキ音に目が覚める。[np]

*page89|
The tire screech wasn't very loud, so the car must have being going really slowly.[np]
;;タイヤが軋むような音はそれほど大きくなかったから、車は低速でゆるゆると渡ってきたのだろう。[np]

*page90|
...I managed to retain my composure, despite the shock of the incident.[np]
;;……などと、事件の衝撃に関係なく、おれの頭は異様に冴え渡っていた。[np]

*page91|
The driver jumped out of the car, shouting.[np]
;;運転手が車を飛び降りて、わめいた。[np]

*page92|
‘What the hell were you doing, you idiot? This isn't my fault!’[np]
;;なにしてんだ馬鹿野郎、俺のせいじゃねえぞ。[np]

*page93|
But the traffic signal clearly conveyed the blame.[np]
;;信号は彼の過ちを指摘していた。[np]

*page94|
People gathered around the intersection.[np]
;;交差点のそこかしこから、人が集まってくる。[np]

*page95|
Beside Ikuko-san, who was laying on the ground face-up, Kanon stood perfectly still.[np]
;;地面に仰向けに倒れた郁子さんのそばで、花音が突っ立っていた。[np]

*page96|
That girl stood like a statue, wearing the face she does when ignoring her mother's cajolery...[np]
;;少女はまだ、母親の媚を聞き流していたときの顔で、[np]
;;Hyper literal TLC plox.
;;my guess.

*page97|
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7802]“Mm...”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7802]“うん……”[np]

*page98|
And then she nodded.[np]
;;と、うなずいていた。[np]

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*page99|
......[np]
;;…………。[np]

*page100|
...[np]
;;……。[np]

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*page101|
 Her ankle throbbed in pain.[wvl]
;; 右の足首がずきずきと痛む。[wvl]
[nm t="郁子" s=yuu_7117b]“I'm completely fine.”[wvl]
;;[nm t="郁子" s=yuu_7117b]“ぜんぜんだいじょうぶよ”[wvl]
 Her mother's patronizing laughter echoed in the dark room.[wvl]
;; 暗い病室に、母の見下したような笑い声が響いた。[wvl]
 Coach had been hit by a car.[l] She didn't remember much after that.[l] The police came, and she remembered Kyousuke running around in a hurry or something.[np]
;; コーチが車に撥ねられた。[l]それから先は、よく覚えていない。[l]警察が来て、京介が慌しく動いていたような気がする。[np]

*page105|
[nm t="郁子" s=yuu_7118]“Kanon-chan, did you get hurt?”[wvl]
;;[nm t="郁子" s=yuu_7118]“花音ちゃん、怪我はない?”[wvl]
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7804]“No.”[wvl]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7804]“ない”[wvl]
[nm t="郁子" s=yuu_7119]“That's right, I protected you. Though it happened so fast, you probably don't remember the details.”[wvl]
;;[nm t="郁子" s=yuu_7119]“そうよね、私が守ってあげたのよね。とっさのことだったから覚えてないでしょうけど”[wvl]
@r
@r
;;WOAH @r's! That's not something you see every day in gsen, it's more of an FSN thing. - pondr
 However, Kanon remembered the details of the accident clearly.[wvl]
;; しかし、花音は事故の瞬間をはっきりと覚えていた。[wvl]
;;more specific to distinguish from that she DIDN'T remember what happened after the accident.
 Ikuko hadn't protected her.[np]
;; かばわれてなどいない。[np]

*page110|
 Kanon saw the sluggish car coming.[l] She yelled, ‘Watch out!’[l] However, Ikuko faced the car in a sort of suicidal standoff.[l] She pushed Kanon away, and the next moment, she was lying on the ground.[l] It looked more like intentionally slipping and tumbling over in an exaggerated fashion to Kanon.[l] In fact, the car never even touched her.[wvl]
;; のろのろと走ってくる車には気づいていた。[l]そして危ない、と叫んだ。[l]しかし、郁子は挑むように車に向かっていった。[l]花音の肩をあらぬ方向に押して、次の瞬間には地面に倒れこんでいた。[l]花音の目には、自ら足を滑らせて大げさに転倒したようにしか見えなかった。[l]事実、車は郁子に接触しなかったのだから。[wvl]
;;Kanon is doing the yelling, I don't know why it was changed to someone. Also, contendedly wasn't a typo of contentedly, it was a typo of contendingly
 Her head was just barely scratched.[l] She would stay in the hospital overnight just to be sure all was well.[l] That was it.[wvl]
;; 頭にかすり傷。[l]大事を取って一日だけ入院。[l]それだけだった。[wvl]
 Actually, when Ikuko pushed Kanon out of the way, she might have sprained Kanon's ankle.[l] That was a far more serious concern.[np]
;; いや、郁子に突き飛ばされたとき、足をひねったような気がする。[l]そちらのほうがむしろ心配だった。[np]

*page113|
[nm t="郁子" s=yuu_7120]“Don't worry, Kanon-chan. I'll make sure the meanies from the media get wind of this.”[wvl]
;;[nm t="郁子" s=yuu_7120]“ちゃんとうるさいマスコミには伝えておくからね、花音ちゃん”[wvl]
 The mother was chivalrously toppled while protecting her daughter.[wvl]
;; 娘をかばい、自動車事故にあった母。[wvl]
 It was a fabricated fairy tale.[l] But her mind had already decided to paint that fabricated fairy tale as reality.[np]
;; 偽りの美談。[l]偽りの物語が、すでに彼女の頭のなかで出来上がっていた。[np]
;;technically there's nothing mentioned about her believing it's the actual truth(She is crazy but not sure if it's at that level...). Just that she's already managed to come up with that angle...(as in it's what she plans to feed to the media).  Maybe she does, maybe she doesn't.
;;hopefully that's the abiguity you were looking for. - pondr

*page116|
 ――What a person.[wvl]
;; ――なんて人なの。[wvl]
 Kanon had no idea such an insignificant, petty human could possibly exist.[l] Remembering that this woman was her own mother froze Kanon's blood.[wvl]
;; この世にここまでちっぽけで、つまらない人間がいるなんて知らなかった。[l]それが、自分の母親だと思い知らされて、花音は凍りついていた。[wvl]
[nm t="郁子" s=yuu_7121]“Let's just hope this will make the judges go a little easier on you tomorrow.”[wvl]
;;[nm t="郁子" s=yuu_7121]“これで、明日のジャッジも甘くなるといいんだけれどね”[wvl]
;;Honestly, what exactly is going through Ikuko's mind is a mystery to me(as it probably is to anyone), so I kind of want to avoid going into detailed descriptions that would aid in creating a concrete image(read: let's just go with what the original says)
;;sounds good to me, but I feel like at least YOU should understand it... just so we don't get mistl's sneaking up on us... - pondr
 Ikuko's chin jerks with a faint grin.[l] All Kanon could do was smile awkwardly.[np]
;; 薄笑いを放るようにあごをしゃくった。[l]花音はぎこちなく笑うしかなかった。[np]

*page120|
 ‘I wish she would just die,’ she plainly thought.[l] Those lingering sentiments finally crystallized, and Kanon said,[wvl]
;; いっそ死ねばよかったのに、はっきりとそう思った。[l]これまでくすぶっていたものがついに結晶化して花音は言った。[wvl]
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7805]“Coach, you love me, right?”[wvl]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7805]“コーチはわたしのこと、大好きなんだよね”[wvl]
[nm t="郁子" s=yuu_7122]“What?”[wvl]
;;[nm t="郁子" s=yuu_7122]“どうしたの?”[wvl]
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7806]“I mean, you've always loved me, right?”[wvl]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7806]“ずっと、好きなんだよね”[wvl]
[nm t="郁子" s=yuu_7123]“Of course.”[wvl]
;;[nm t="郁子" s=yuu_7123]“もちろんよ”[wvl]
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7807]“I see. Then――”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7807]“そっか。じゃあ――”[np]

*page126|
 Kanon focuses on the faint echoes of the hospital's corridors.[l] There's nothing within earshot.[l] No one else is in the hospital room.[l] The white bed, the white Ikuko, glaringly distinct against the black darkness of the room...[wvl]
;; 花音は耳を研ぎ澄ました。[l]物音は聞こえない。[l]病室には誰もいない。[l]室内の闇を切り取る、白いベッドと白い郁子。[wvl]
 Sweat runs down her temple, trickling down her cheeks and across her neck.[l] It's winter, but it's terribly hot.[l] Kanon's fingers tighten into a fist, and her beating heart hammers against her ribcage.[l] She tries to move, but her feet stick to the floor like they're glued in place.[wvl]
;; 汗が、こめかみから頬に、頬から首筋へと伝った。[l]冬なのに、暑い。[l]両手の五指に力が入って、鼓動が胸壁を殴打した。[l]一歩踏みよるべきなのだろうが、足裏が接着剤を塗られたように床に貼りついている。[wvl]
@r
@r
@r
 Now, do it.[l] There's no other way.[np]
;; さあ、やれ。[l]ほかに方法は思いつかない。[np]

*page129|
 Mother and daughter.[l] The irrefutable bonds of blood.[l] As long as her mother exists, this nightmare will continue.[l] She must break these bonds...[wvl]
;; 母と子。[l]あらがうことのできない血の絆。[l]母が存在する限り悪夢は続く。[l]断ち切らねば……。[wvl]
 Ikuko let her guard down.[l] She could never have imagined her daughter's bare fangs might be turned against her.[wvl]
;; 郁子は完全に油断している。[l]娘が自分に牙を剥くなど、郁子の辞書にはない。[wvl]
 Kanon stands still, looking down upon her mother.[l] This is the last time she'll see her mother's smiling face.[l] Long ago, she had believed that this face――one ruled by flattery and pettiness――was a gentle one.[wvl]
;; 花音は郁子を見下ろす格好で、立ち尽くしていた。[l]母親の笑顔を眺めるのも、もう、これで最後だ。[l]昔は、媚と矮小さを同居させたこの顔を、優しげなものと信じていた。[wvl]
 She reflects on her past subconsciously.[l] Kanon had looked up at this face quite a bit as a child.[np]
;; 無意識に、過去の思い出を重ねている自分がいた。[l]体が小さかったころ、よくこの顔を見上げていたものだ。[np]

*page133|
[nm t="郁子" s=yuu_7124]“You've really grown up well, Kanon-chan.”[wvl]
;;[nm t="郁子" s=yuu_7124]“立派になったわね、花音ちゃんも”[wvl]
 Kanon flushes all thoughts of hesitation from her mind.[l] She won't let herself be fooled again.[l] Ikuko loves herself.[l] She's just using her daughter to fulfill the dreams she couldn't fulfill herself.[wvl]
;; 花音は、一切の邪念を追い払うことにした。[l]惑わされるものか。[l]郁子は、自分が大好きなのだ。[l]自分の果たせなかった夢を娘に負わせ、利用しているにすぎない。[wvl]
 Up until now, she's obeyed her mother's instructions.[l] Even though she knew her mother had no talent, she allowed her to be her coach for a long period of time.[l] Kanon didn't reject or revise her mother's free skate program, either.[l] She wore whatever Ikuko asked her to wear.[l] She went along with her mother, showing off to the press even though she felt it was disgraceful.[wvl]
;; いままでは言われるがままに従った。[l]能力が足りないのを知っていて、長らくコーチを務めさせてやった。[l]フリーのプログラムも義理立てて変えなかった。[l]衣装も郁子の望みに合わせた。[l]郁子の見栄につきあって、出たくもないマスコミにも顔を出した。[wvl]
@r
 Kanon bites her lip.[l] Her Christmas Eve plans were the last straw.[np]
;; 花音は唇を噛み締めた。[l]なにより、クリスマスだ。[np]
;;I think the last sentence is supposed to be something like this... this is my tlc (lawl) -pondr hyperliteral is I presume "the key part was christmas"

*page137|
 She sacrificed her promise to her brother, the man she loves, for the sake of her mother's image...![wvl]
;; 大好きな兄さんとの約束を破ってまで、お前の顔を立ててやったではないか……![wvl]
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7808]“What will you cling to now?”[wvl]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7808]“これいじょう、なにをすがろうっていうの、あなたは”[wvl]
[nm t="郁子" s=yuu_7125]“...Cling?”[wvl]
;;[nm t="郁子" s=yuu_7125]“……すがる?”[wvl]
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7809]“Stop trying to rely on me.”[wvl]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7809]“わたしに、のしかかろうとしないで”[wvl]
[nm t="郁子" s=yuu_7126]“Haha, you're acting strange, Kanon-chan.”[np]
;;[nm t="郁子" s=yuu_7126]“ふふ、変な花音ちゃん”[np]

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*page142|
 At that moment, Kanon's arm shot out.[l] Like an arrow, it fired at Ikuko's neck.[l] Her vision, her arm, her breath, her knees... her entire body was trembling furiously.[np]
;; その瞬間、花音の腕が伸びた。[l]よく引き絞った弓のようにしなり、郁子の首に迫った。[l]視界が、腕が、呼吸が、両膝が震えた。[np]

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*page143|
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7810]“Wh... why...?”[wvl]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7810]“どう、して……”[wvl]
 No.[l] In reality, Kanon hadn't budged one inch.[wvl]
;; 現実には、花音は身動き一つしていなかった。[wvl]
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7811]“God, why...?”[wvl]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7811]“ああ、どうして……”[wvl]
 She suppresses a moan as she stands there shivering.[wvl]
;; がたがたと震えながら、せりあがる嗚咽に耐えていた。[wvl]
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7812]“You're the worst mother ever... the absolute worst... but, God... why...?”[wvl]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7812]“……あなたは、最低の母親なのに……最低なのに、なのに、ああ、どうして……”[wvl]
;;using flipping at an emotional scene, interesting choice.
;;I wanted some light curse, but as no good ones come to mind, yeah, it'd be better without it. thanks. - pondr
 A mother is still a mother, no matter what.[np]
;; 母は、母ではないか……。[np]
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*page149|
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7813]“...Why do I feel okay with you using me――!?”[wvl]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7813]“……どれだけ利用されてもいいとか、思っちゃうのかな――!”[wvl]
[nm t="郁子" s=yuu_7127]“K-Kanon-chan?”[np]
;;[nm t="郁子" s=yuu_7127]“か、花音ちゃん?”[np]

*page151|
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7814]“Shut up!” [wveh]she explodes in anger.[l] [nm t="花音" s=kan_7815]“You're always like that! Always, always, just living in your own perfect little world, thinking you're the perfect person! You'll die in that world!”[wvl]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7814]“黙れ!”[wveh]声を爆発させて花音は叫んだ。[l][nm t="花音" s=kan_7815]“あなたはいつもそう、ずっとそう、ずっとずっと気づかない完璧な人間で、ずっと自分の正しい世界に住んで、その中で死んでいくだけ!”[wvl]
 Ikuko had a frightened expression, as if thinking, ‘Has my child gone mad?’[wvl]
;; 郁子は我が子が気が触れたと、怯えるような顔をしていた。[wvl]
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7816]“But it's alright... whatever. I understand now... I realized something.”[wvl]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7816]“でもいいよ……もう、わかったよ……わかっちゃったんだよ”[wvl]
 Kanon looks back on her short life.[np]
;; 花音はこれまでの短い人生を振り返っていた。[np]

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*page155|
 She had been forced to skate as though it were a natural thing.[l] But even if she was pressured by her mother, the many crowds' applauses were real.[np]
;; 当然のようにやらされたフィギュアスケート。[l]母親に強制されたとはいえ、大勢の人々の拍手は本物だった。[np]

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*page156|
 Those people's smiles were real.[np]
;; あの人たちの笑顔は、本物だった。[np]

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*page157|
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7817]“I realized I have to say, ‘Thank you’...!”[wvl]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7817]“ありがとうって、言わなきゃいけないんだって……!”[wvl]
[nm t="郁子"]“......”[wvl]
;;[nm t="郁子"]“…………”[wvl]
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7818]“It hurts, it's confusing, it feels wrong, but I have to say it!”[wvl]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7818]“苦しいけど、くやしいけど、おかしいなって思いながらでも、言わなきゃいけないんだって!”[wvl]
 Kanon glared at her mother in anger and disgrace,[l] but her words continued to flow out endlessly.[np]
;; 怒りと屈辱に目を吊り上げた。[l]とめどなく言葉が溢れた。[np]
;;Kanon wouldn't say "vexing" when she's all emotional

*page161|
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7819]“Even if you were just using me for your own sake, you did everything with so much gratitude, and emotion.”[wvl]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7819]“たとえ、あなたが自分のためにわたしを利用していたのだとしても、そこに、いろんな感謝や感動があったんだから”[wvl]
[nm t="郁子" s=yuu_7129]“...Kanon-chan... c-calm down, will you...?”[wvl]
;;[nm t="郁子" s=yuu_7129]“……花音ちゃん、お、落ち着いて……?”[wvl]
 Kanon shook her head.[l] Any intervention would be futile.[l] I'm talking to myself right now――[np]
;;it's kind of strange to go from third person to first person in the same line like that, but yeah that's what's happening. - chikan
;; 花音は首を振り続けた。[l]何を言っても無駄だ。[l]わたしは今、わたしに話している。[np]
;;   I                                               see         that. How odd. - pondr

*page164|
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7820]“I make money for you, right? Okay. I'll keep making money for you. Skating is expensive, after all. If you hadn't paid millions of yen, no one would ever have heard of Azai Kanon.”[wvl]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7820]“わたしはお金になるんでしょう? いいよ。どんどん稼いで。スケートはお金かかるもんね。あなたが、何百万っていうお金を出してくれなかったら、いまごろ浅井花音なんて誰も知らなかっただろうね”[wvl]
[nm t="郁子" s=yuu_7130]“That's not...”[wvl]
;;[nm t="郁子" s=yuu_7130]“そんな、つもりは……”[wvl]
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7821]“It's fine, really... do what you want with me.”[wvl]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7821]“いいんだよ、本当に……本当に、好きにして……”[wvl]
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7822]“You were always gentle to me, and so darn sweet... that's good enough...”[wvl]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7822]“あなたは、わたしに優しくて、誰よりも親切だった。もう、それだけでいいよ……”[wvl]
 Kanon mutters as she cries herself out.[np]
;; 泣き疲れ、つぶやくように言った。[np]

*page170|
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7823]“It's fine, Mom... I guess I'll stop hating you...”[wvl]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7823]“もういいよ、お母さん……もう、憎むのは終わりにする……”[wvl]
[nm t="郁子" s=yuu_7131]“Kanon-chan...” [wveh]Ikuko says dubiously.[l] [nm t="郁子" s=yuu_7132]“Surely to God you aren't saying you don't like skating anymore...?”[wvl]
;;[nm t="郁子" s=yuu_7131]“花音ちゃん……”[wveh]郁子がけげんそうに言った。[l][nm t="郁子" s=yuu_7132]“まさか、スケートが嫌になったの?”[wvl]
 Kanon smiles weakly and shakes her head.[wvl]
;; 花音は力なく笑って、首を振った。[wvl]
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7824]“I love it.”[wvl]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7824]“大好きだよ”[wvl]
[nm t="郁子" s=yuu_7133]“I see...”[wvl]
;;[nm t="郁子" s=yuu_7133]“そう……”[wvl]
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7825]“I'll be number one, I swear.”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7825]“一番になるよ”[np]

*page176|
 Her foolish mother returned once more to her genuine expression.[l] Kanon let out an involuntary laugh.[np]
;; 愚かな母に、素の笑顔がもどった。[l]花音は思わず、吹き出してしまった。[np]

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*page177|
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7826]“You're my mother, after all... I can't help it...”[wvl]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7826]“だって、お母さんだもんね……しょうが、ないよね……”[wvl]
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 At that moment, Ikuko swallowed her breath in surprise.[l] In Kanon's eyes, the plaster abomination surrounding her mother began to crack.[wvl]
;; そのときだった。[l]郁子がはっとしたように息を呑むのがわかった。[l]怪物の顔に亀裂が走ったように花音には見えた。[wvl]
[nm t="郁子" s=yuu_7134]“Has... has your mother been hurting you, Kanon-chan...?”[wvl]
;;[nm t="郁子" s=yuu_7134]“お母さんは、花音ちゃんを傷つけていたの……?”[wvl]
 No one answered her mutter.[wvl]
;; つぶやきは、誰にも拾ってもらえなかった。[wvl]
[nm t="郁子" s=yuu_7135]“Hey, answer me...”[wvl]
;;[nm t="郁子" s=yuu_7135]“ねえ、そうなの……?”[wvl]
 The mother started quivering as well.[np]
;; 母はいまさらながらに震えだした。[np]

*page183|
[nm t="郁子" s=yuu_7136]“Kanon-chan?”[wvl]
;;[nm t="郁子" s=yuu_7136]“花音ちゃん?”[wvl]
 She looked into her daughter's face with bated breath.[l] When she realized that contained within was pity toward herself, and the feeling that the only thing left was to just give up, her lips tightened and she blinked a few times.[wvl]
;; 彼女は、息を詰めて娘を見て、そこに自分への哀れみとあきらめしかないことを悟ると、唇をぎゅっと結んで目をしばたいた。[wvl]
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7827]“Poor Mom. Nobody likes you these days. So I'll be number one, I swear. And I'll be on your side, even if no one else in the whole world will.”[wvl]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7827]“かわいそうなお母さん。誰もあなたのことなんて好きじゃない。だったら、わたしだけが、一番になってあげる。世界でただ一人、わたしだけは、味方になってあげるよ”[wvl]
 I'm honored to accept the privileged title of Mom's number one――[np]
;; お母さんの一番になる権利、わたしがもらった――。[np]
;;I'm having difficulty here. I can't think of a way to modify this without ruining the emotion and sentiment involved.
;;pwned bitches. - pondr
;;Number one is supposed to be a parallel between being the best and also being Ikuko's most important person, number one, etc. It's supposed to make the reader go "Awww" She's saying ‘she'll be the best' but not ‘the best at skating', it's to do with her love for her mother. Something that can be interpreted at a glance as "I'll be the best/number one at skating" but when you actually read it, you see it's "I'll be your number one". That's why it's tricky
;;It seems okay to me. The last "Mom's number one" makes the double meaning pretty clear, at least to me. - pondr

*page187|
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7828]“It's okay, Mom. It's... it's okay.”[wvl]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7828]“いいんだよ、お母さん……もう、いいんだよ……”[wvl]
 Kanon smiled.[l] If she doesn't smile, nothing will change.[wvl]
;; 花音は、微笑んだ。[l]微笑まねば、なにも変わらない。[wvl]
[nm t="郁子" s=yuu_7137]“Kanon-chan, I...”[np]
;;[nm t="郁子" s=yuu_7137]“花音ちゃん、私……”[np]

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 After speaking with gasping breaths, her eyes slowly filled with despair.[wvl]
;; あえぐように言ったのを最後に、母の目にじっくりと絶望が募っていった。[wvl]
 And then the night wore on.[wvl]
;; やがて、夜は深まっていく。[wvl]
 The contest Kanon's mother wagered her honor and even life on slowly drew near.[np]
;; 花音にとって母親の名誉と命すら懸けた試合が刻一刻と迫ってきた。[np]

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