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I won't hesitate any longer.[np]

[nm t="京介"]“Talk to me, Kanon.”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“聞こう”[np]

Gazing at her, I leave these few, short words.[np]

@chr c=kanon_a_si_14c_b
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7393]“Err... umm...”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7393]“えっとね、んとね”[np]
;;Hey, it's Coco from Ever 17! (えっとね、んとね... <insert sentence here>) - pondr

[nm t="京介"]“Yes?”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“うん”[np]

@chr c=kanon_c_si_23_b
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7394]“I just... I just want you to protect me, Nii-san.”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7394]“兄さんに、守って欲しいなって”[np]

[nm t="京介"]“Protect you?”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“守る?”[np]

@chr c=kanon_a_si_14c_b
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7395]“Well, I mean... I mean I wanna be your p-... partner.”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7395]“んと、つまり……ペ、ペアになって欲しいの”[np]

[nm t="京介"]“Partner...?” [np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“ペア……”[np]

I suppose we're not talking about figure skating here.[np]

@chr c=kanon_c_si_23b_b
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7396]“Do you hate me, Nii-san?”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7396]“兄さん、わたしのこと嫌い?”[np]

[nm t="京介"]“Can't say I do...”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“いや、別に……”[np]

@chr c=kanon_a_si_14_b
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7397]“So that's an ‘okay’... right?”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7397]“じゃあ、OKってことだね?”[np]

I shake my head.[np]

[nm t="京介"]“You know, Kanon...”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“あのな、花音”[np]

She interrupted me, possibly fearing an outright refusal.[np]

@chr c=kanon_a_si_13_b
@chr_jump pos=c
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7398]“Y-yeah, I know, you're not interested in things like that. I know that.”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7398]“わ、わかってるよ、兄さんがそういうことに興味ないってことくらい”[np]

[nm t="京介"]“Honestly, I'm astonished that you [ font italic="true" ]do[ resetfont ] have an interest in things like that.”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“お前がそういうことに興味を持っていたことが驚きだ”[np]

@chr c=kanon_a_si_09c_b
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7399]“I know right? I was surprised too.”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7399]“なんとあったの。自分でもびっくりなの”[np]

I sighed deeply as my sight fell down to the floor.[np]

@chr c=kanon_a_si_14_b
In her heart, Kanon must be incredibly anxious, despite her leisurely attitude. Each one of my words must feel heavy to her.[np]

[nm t="京介"]“Well, I can't really take the moral high ground anymore by saying we're just brother and sister...”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“まあ、いまさら兄妹だからという、道徳的なことは言わん”[np]

[nm t="花音" s=kan_7400]“Yeah, you're too much of a bad boy to say stuff like that anyway.”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7400]“うん、兄さんほどのワルがそんなこと言っちゃダメだね”[np]

[nm t="京介"]“But, you know, I can't just up and see you in that light.”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“ただ、わかってるだろうが、おれはお前をそういうふうには見られない”[np]

@chr c=kanon_c_si_23c_b
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7401]“We'll just have to change that, then.”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7401]“じゃあ、これからだね、何事も”[np]

Such optimism only showcases her anxiety.[np]

[nm t="京介"]“On the contrary, let me ask you a question: why do you like me?”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“逆に聞くが、お前はおれのどこがいいんだ?”[np]

@chr c=kanon_a_si_06_b
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7402]“Good question!”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7402]“はてー?”[np]

[nm t="京介"]“Answer me seriously.”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“真面目に答えろ”[np]

Focusing on skating for so long has stunted her ability to do other things, like uphold sincere, heart-to-heart conversations.[np]
;;Suppose to carry a "She's done nothing but skating so she doesn't know how to do anything else(carry a real conversation)" nuance. It's not far from that already but I would request a rephrase to better draw that out anyway
;;fixed - pondr

@chr c=kanon_a_si_14c_b
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7403]“Because... because... you're on my side...”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7403]“に、兄さんは、味方だから……”[np]
;;note the use of mikata, which kind of stands out in the sentence, friend is kind of generic but I guess means the same. basically just means "You're on my side" translated as ally a lot but that would be dumb in context.
;;Yeah... I'd love to leave it friend, but she says this a lot. And friend doesn't stand out in the sentence like you suggest it does in the japanese. - pondr

[nm t="京介"]“I'm on your side?”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“味方?”[np]

[nm t="花音" s=kan_7404]“And because you're reliable. Because you're kind, and gentle...”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7404]“頼れそうだから。なんだかんだ優しいから”[np]

[nm t="京介"]“There are more reliable people out there than you could ever want, Kanon. Take Ikuko-san, f-”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“頼れそうな相手なんていくらでもいるだろう。郁子さんとか……”[np]

Kanon interrupted me a second time.[np]

@chr c=kanon_c_si_23b_b
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7405]“No, it's only you, Nii-san, not anybody else. Coach is... well... Coach's just Coach.”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7405]“いや、兄さんしかいないの。コーチは……えと……コーチだし”[np]

[nm t="京介"]“Are you sure you aren't just lonely?”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“お前は寂しいだけなんじゃないか?”[np]

@chr c=kanon_c_si_03_b
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7406]“I am lonely...”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7406]“寂しいよ……”[np]

Her words fell like droplets.[np]

@chr c=kanon_c_si_23c_b
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7407]“But still... I love you, Nii-san.”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7407]“でも、兄さんは好き……”[np]

She turned away from me, muttering.[np]

[nm t="京介"]“...Huh?”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“……あれ?”[np]

I was hung up on something.[np]

I remembered something as I stared at her childish profile.[np]

[nm t="京介"]“Hey, back when you were a kid...”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“お前、ガキのころ……”[np]

@chr c=kanon_a_si_05_b
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7408]“Hm?”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7408]“んー?”[np]

[nm t="京介"]“...Nah, it's nothing. I was just thinking about how long we've known each other.”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“いや、おれたちってけっこうつき合い長いよな”[np]

[nm t="花音" s=kan_7409]“It's been a real long time, huh?”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7409]“長いねー、実は”[np]

[nm t="京介"]“When did we first meet?”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“初めて会ったときは、いつだ?”[np]

[nm t="花音" s=kan_7410]“Oh, uh... it was that time you almost starved to death.”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7410]“んとねー、兄さんが餓死しかけてたとき”[np]

[nm t="京介"]“Starved to death...?”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“餓死……?”[np]

[nm t="花音" s=kan_7411]“Yeah, remember? You lived in a janky old apartment then, instead of this fancy place.”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7411]“そうだよー、兄さんが、こんな立派なマンションじゃなくてすんごい古いアパートに住んでたときだねー”[np]

[nm t="京介"]“Right... that sure was a long time ago. The bath and toilet were in the same room, the walls were paper thin... there was barely enough room to move around in. It was pretty much the definition of janky.”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“ああ……だいぶ昔だな。風呂もトイレも共同で、砂壁で腐った畳の六畳っていう絵に描いたようなボロアパートな”[np]

Gonzou bought it for me, as a place to stay until I found a way to make a living.[np]

The joker told me he'd buy me anything I needed, but I was way too scared to ask for anything big.[np]
;;joker meaning any exaggerated person. I use it in everyday speech, hear it from other people sometimes too. It fits in nicely with the next line where Kyousuke's just getting a kick out of his old living arrangements and former relationship with Gonzou - pondr

As I look back, I can laugh at the situation. I mean, it's pretty funny if you think about it.[np]

[nm t="京介"]“There were cockroaches all over the place. Foreigners next door sang karaoke every freakin' night. Eugh, and I almost forgot the bathtub. It was so filthy it felt more like I was washing [ font italic="true" ]it[ resetfont ] than vice versa. Oh, that place was god awful.”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“よくゴキブリでたなー。隣の外国人が毎晩カラオケしてるし、風呂はアカが浮きまくってて入れたもんじゃねえし、最悪だったな。なんて名前のアパートだっけか?”[np]

[nm t="花音" s=kan_7412]“Wasn't the complex called ‘Piti Falls’?”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7412]“かわい荘じゃない?”[np]

[nm t="京介"]“No, you gave it that name.”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“ちげー、それはお前がつけた名前だよ”[np]

I couldn't help but laugh.[np]

;Gonzou gave me that room before I found a way to make a living.[np]
;Note the commented out.

@chr c=kanon_a_si_04_b
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7413]“Old times...”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7413]“なつかしいなー”[np]

[nm t="京介"]“Tell me about it.”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“だなあ”[np]

@chr c=kanon_b_si_04c_b
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7414]“You were so mean back in those days.”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7414]“あのときの兄さんときたら、尖ってたなー”[np]

[nm t="京介"]“Really?”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“そうかあ?”[np]

@chr c=kanon_b_si_01_b
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7415]“Yeah, do you remember the time I brought you some food?”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7415]“うん、ご飯もってったとき覚えてる?”[np]

[nm t="京介"]“No, what happened?”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“はて?”[np]

@chr c=kanon_b_si_16_b
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7416]“‘How much?’ You gave me a glare that I thought would kill me.”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7416]“いくらだ、って、こうギロってにらむの”[np]

[nm t="京介"]“‘There is no such thing as a free lunch,’ you know.”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“タダより高いものはねえんだ”[np]

@chr c=kanon_b_si_01b_b
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7417]“And then you wouldn't take the dang food until you forced two hundred yen down my throat. I told you your money was no good, but you didn't listen...”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7417]“けっきょく二百円渡してきた。いいって言ってるのに”[np]

I had heard that you were Gonzou's daughter.[np]

I figured it'd be bad to owe you of all people a favor.[np]

As we found ourselves drifting into tales of the past, the tension in the room around us began to melt.[np]

[nm t="京介"]“You were already skating by that time, right?”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“あのときにはもう、お前もスケートやってたんだもんな”[np]

@chr c=kanon_b2_si_04c_b
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7418]“Yup, and I always won.”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7418]“うん、よゆーで勝ちまくってた”[np]

[nm t="京介"]“Yes, you did. TV news teams came to my home to talk to me. You have no idea how much that annoyed me. People called me the brother of the ‘genius skating girl’. I just wanted to crawl under some rock and die.”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“そうだよ、おれのところにもテレビ屋が来たよ。うざくてしかたがなかったな。天才スケート少女の兄貴みたいな扱いされて、ほんと死にたかったわ”[np]

It may have been a command of Gonzou's that kept Kanon's complicated family situation largely unknown to the outside world.[np]

@chr c=kanon_b2_si_04b_b
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7419]“Nii-san, you're so gloomy... I don't think they'll ever find a cure.”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7419]“兄さんの根暗なところは一生なおんないんだろうね”[np]

[nm t="京介"]“Shut up...”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“うるせえな……”[np]

I smiled bitterly.[np]

@chr c=kanon_a_si_01_b
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7420]“Mmm, you're the best, Nii-san.”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7420]“うん、やっぱいいなー、兄さんは”[np]

[nm t="京介"]“What...?”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“なんだよ……”[np]

@chr c=kanon_a_si_07_b
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7421]“Sometimes it seems like you're the only one on Non-chan's side.”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7421]“兄さんだけはね、のんちゃんの味方でいてくれそう”[np]

She wore a blissful, radiant smile.[np]

@chr c=kanon_a_si_01_b
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7422]“You come off like a person with a whole lot of friends, but the truth is, you only have a couple...”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7422]“兄さんも友達多そうに見えて、実は少ない人だろうけど……”[np]

[nm t="京介"]“Of all the...?”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“失礼な”[np]

@chr c=kanon_c_si_23c_b
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7423]“But even out of those... only Non-chan loves you like this.”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7423]“のんちゃんだけは、大好きだよ”[np]

Kanon's gentle voice flows into my ears.[np]

@quake sx=20 sy=3 xcnt=2 ycnt=5 time=500 fade=true
Her breath tickles and massages me, and my strengthless knees cause my feet to stagger.[np]

[nm t="京介"]“Mm...”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“む……”[np]

@chr c=kanon_a_si_09_b
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7424]“What's up?”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7424]“どしたの?”[np]

[nm t="京介"]“...Mm... well... is it cold in here to you?”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“……ん、いや……寒くないか?”[np]

[nm t="花音" s=kan_7425]“Not at all.”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7425]“ぜんぜん”[np]

[nm t="京介"]“C'mon, it's freezing in here. Wait... I'm feeling dizzy, and my heart's racing.”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“いや、寒い。頭もぐらぐらしやがる。動悸も激しい”[np]

@chr c=kanon_a_si_04_b
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7426]“That's love!”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7426]“それ、恋だよ!”[np]

[nm t="京介"]“It's the flu, you idiot.”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“カゼだ、バカ”[np]

@chr c=kanon_a_si_09b_b
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7427]“You sure? Are you okay?”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7427]“ほんとにー? だいじょうぶー?”[np]

She put her palm to my forehead nervously.[np]

@chr c=kanon_a_si_13_b
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7428]“Uwawa... you gotta be hotter than a hundred and four!”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7428]“うわわ、四十度くらいあるよ!”[np]

Please don't scare me like that...[np]

@chr c=kanon_a_si_12_b
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7429]“It's because you're always pushing yourself too much... you can be so stupid sometimes!”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7429]“兄さんいつも気ぃ張ってるからだよー、もうバカー”[np]

Well, it is true that I didn't notice it until I relaxed.[np]

[nm t="京介"]“Hey, Kanon...”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“おい、花音……”[np]

@chr c=kanon_a_si_07_b
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7430]“I'll bring you some porridge...! Do you like plum? I'll mix some in.”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7430]“おかゆつくればいいんだね!? ウメボシはいれる?”[np]

[nm t="京介"]“No, wait...”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“ちげー”[np]

...I'm so damn cold...[np]

[nm t="京介"]“...C-can you sleep by yourself? I gave you the key to the room, right?”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“お前、一人で寝れるな? 部屋の鍵は渡してあったか?”[np]

@chr c=kanon_a_si_09_b
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7431]“Yeah, what about it?”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7431]“うん、どうしたの?”[np]

[nm t="京介"]“I'm going out. Bye...”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“おれは出てく。じゃあな……”[np]

@camera angle=l
@chr c=kanon_a_si_09c_b
@chr_jump pos=c
@chr_pos_change before=c after=ll
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7432]“W-waitwaitwait!”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7432]“ちょ、ちょちょっ”[np]

@chr_pos_change before=ll after=l
She almost fell over when she grabbed my arm. She looked like a comedian.[np]

[nm t="花音" s=kan_7433]“W-why!?”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7433]“な、なんで!?”[np]

[nm t="京介"]“If you catch my sickness, all of Japan will hate me.”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“カゼがうつったら、おれはいろんな人に恨まれる”[np]

@chr l=kanon_a_si_09_b
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7434]“Where are you going?”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7434]“どこ行くの?”[np]

[nm t="京介"]“A hotel, or something.”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“その辺のビジホに泊まる”[np]

No, hotels are too expensive.[np]

Eiichi's Palace is a possibility for the night, I suppose.[np]

Maybe I can give that little prick the flu... he's an idiot, though, so he probably won't catch it...[np]

@camera angle=u time=200
@black rule=rule_wave time=100


My vision suddenly went black, and I was coated in the sensation that my body was floating in air.[np]


;背景 主人公の部屋 夜
@bg storage=bg_01c1100 rule=rule_q_c_td time=2000

I open my eyes.[np]

@chr c=kanon_c_si_03_b
Kanon is gazing at me with an air of uneasiness.[np]

@chr c=kanon_a_si_13_b
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7435]“Wah... what should I do...? What should I do...?”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7435]“わ……どうしよ、どーしよ”[np]

@chr_jump pos=c
@quake sx=0 sy=10 ycnt=3 time=500
The sound of Kanon stomping about on the floor fills my ears.[np]

Heavy steps echo in my skull.[np]

@chr c=kanon_c_si_02b_b
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7436]“There's no choice! Non-chan will keep you warm, Nii-san!”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7436]“ここは、のんちゃんが、温めるしかない!”[np]

My mind was swallowed by darkness after hearing these words.[np]

@bg_mosaic time=1000



@black time=1000
@wait time=1000
@ev storage=ev_kanon_icatch time=2000
@wait time=2000
@black time=1000

@jump storage="gk02.ks"