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 Kanon had always been cold to her mother, Ikuko.[wvl]
;; 花音は母親の郁子に冷めていた。[wvl]
 She had no idea when she began to feel such discontent concerning her mother.[l] For all Kanon knew, her heart had been dead since she entered adulthood.[l] For whatever reason, her mother simply seemed abnormal to her childish mind.[l] She was just too beautiful, and obsessed with keeping up appearances.[np]
;; いつごろから、憮然とした態度を取るようになってしまったのか、花音にはわからない。[l]物心がついたときには、もう、心が凍りついていたかもしれない。[l]子供心に、普通の人ではないと思った。[l]母はあまりにも美しすぎた。[l]外見と外面を美しく見せることに執着していた。[np]

*page3|
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7508]“Mom, where's Papa?”[wvl]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7508]“お母さん、パパは?”[wvl]
 ‘Non-chan’ was not supposed to know.[np]
;; それは、"のんちゃん"の知るところではなかった。[np]

*page5|
[nm t="郁子" s=yuu_7043]“Non-chan, do you like skating? It's fun, right? Lots and lots of people are really happy when you skate. I'm happy when you skate, too. So Non-chan just needs to devote herself to skating, and not worry about anything else.”[wvl]
;;[nm t="郁子" s=yuu_7043]“のんちゃん、スケートは楽しい? 楽しいでしょう? 大勢の人が喜んでくれるものね。お母さんもとってもうれしいわ。だから、のんちゃんはスケートのことだけを考えてればいいの”[wvl]
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7509]“Okay, but... everyone else has a Papa.”[wvl]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7509]“うん……でも、みんなパパがおうちにいるよ?”[wvl]
[nm t="郁子" s=yuu_7044]“Non-chan is different from everyone else. She's special. Look, can anyone jump on the ice like you?”[wvl]
;;[nm t="郁子" s=yuu_7044]“のんちゃんは、みんなとは違うの。特別な子なの。だって見てごらんなさい。のんちゃんのお友達は、氷の上で跳んだりできる?”[wvl]
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7510]“No.”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7510]“できない”[np]

*page9|
 Children are sensitive to lies, and Kanon was a particularly sensitive girl.[l] Thus, even at that age, she understood that her mother was hiding something from her.[l] Her mother's surname was Kanesaki, so why was her surname Azai?[l] However, though their names may have been different, Ikuko had doted on Kanon far too strongly for Kanon to see her as a complete stranger.[wvl]
;; 子供は嘘に敏感で、花音は鋭い少女だった。[l]だから、母親が事実を隠していることはなんとなくわかっていた。[l]母親の名前が金崎なのに、なぜ自分は浅井なのか。[l]けれど、苗字が違うという理由だけで、郁子を他人だと思うには、彼女は花音に甘すぎた。[wvl]
 Ikuko gave Kanon everything she ever wanted.[l] From lovely dolls, to the latest video games, to adorable clothes which any of Kanon's friends would envy.[wvl]
;; 欲しいものはなんでも調達してきてくれた。[l]愛らしい人形に最新のテレビゲーム、友達の誰もがうらやむかわいらしい洋服。[wvl]
[nm t="郁子" s=yuu_7045]“I'll do anything for you, Kanon-chan. We can always make more money. It was the same for me.”[np]
;;[nm t="郁子" s=yuu_7045]“花音ちゃんのためならなんでもしてあげる。お金なんてあとからついてくるのよ。私もそうだったから”[np]
;;The line お金なんてあとからついてくるのよ implies that the money she spends on her will simply come right back/follow due to Kanon earning it through her talent or whatnot. I don't know if that comes clear with this sentence, but yeah.
;;Hopefully that's a little more clear now.

*page12|
 Kanon quickly grew tired of it all.[l] After winning various competitions as a child, she soon discovered a fundamental truth about human nature: that getting what you want isn't as satisfying unless you earned it yourself.[wvl]
;; すぐに飽きた。[l]幼いころから大小さまざまな競技会を連覇していた花音は、欲しいものは自分の力で手に入れなければ満足できないという理を、肌で悟っていた。[wvl]
 Her wish for a father was finally realized after receiving――and while she was still in grade school, no less――a special invitation to compete in the Japan Championships on a Senior level.[l] Until that point, she had been competing in the Novice A lists; not even at the Junior level.[l] Despite being unable to bring home the title, her Papa had stroked her head kindly at their first encounter.[np]
;; 念願のパパが手に入ったのは、特別推薦を受けて小学生にして、ノービスAからシニアの全国大会に参戦したときだった。[l]タイトルの獲得にはいたらなかったが、初めて出会ったパパは、そのごつい腕で花音の頭をていねいに撫でてくれた。[np]
;;but we know from a ch. 3 script that Kanon did at one point compete in the junior levels, presumably thereafter. - pondr
;;Yes, it specifically says a special invitation to the senior level Japanese Championship. Not that she was graduated to that level. If you want to clarify the Japan Championship part then that's up to you(it mentions that she couldn't win the title so I think it's probably for the best)

*page14|
[nm t="浅井権三" s=gon_7298]“I'll be taking care of you from now on. You can have anything you want. If you don't like your mother, I'll get you a new one.”[wvl]
;;[nm t="浅井権三" s=gon_7298]“これからは俺が面倒をみてやる。なんでも言え。母親がいやなら替えてやる”[wvl]
 Although Kanon did not understand her father's words, she was relieved to know that she, too, had a father.[l] For the first time, she felt glad she started skating.[np]
;; 言葉の意味はわからなかったが、自分にもパパがいたという安堵に、花音はそのときになって初めて、スケートをやっていて良かったと涙した。[np]

*page16|
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7511]“Mom, I met Papa! Papa came!”[wvl]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7511]“お母さん、パパ、パパ、いたよ!”[wvl]
[nm t="郁子" s=yuu_7046]“Oh really?”[wvl]
;;[nm t="郁子" s=yuu_7046]“そう”[wvl]
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7512]“He said I did good!”[wvl]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7512]“褒めてくれたの!”[wvl]
[nm t="郁子" s=yuu_7047]“Did he now?”[wvl]
;;[nm t="郁子" s=yuu_7047]“そう”[wvl]
 As she watched Kanon laugh and dance, Ikuko bathed in discontent.[l] ‘Go fuck yourself...’ she muttered under her breath.[l] Hearing her, Kanon's heart froze once again.[np]
;; 満面の笑みを浮かべてはしゃぎまわる花音に、郁子はどこか不満げだった。[l]そして、ぼそりとつぶやいた一言。[l]死ねばいいのに……。花音はまた、心を凍りつかせた。[np]

*page21|
 Kanon's day-to-day life of skating rolled ever-forward.[l] Ikuko was extremely kind.[l] She detested coaches who swore at their athletes, and cared for Kanon as well as she could.[l] It had reached the point where Kanon had started to consider Ikuko's instruction to be nothing more than flattery.[wvl]
;; スケートに没頭する毎日が続いた。[l]郁子は異常なほど優しかった。[l]怒鳴り声をあげて選手を一喝するよそのコーチを尻目に、いつも上目づかいで花音におうかがいを立てていた。[l]花音はいつしか、郁子の指導を、ただの媚にしか感じられなくなっていた。[wvl]
 But even still, for the sake of victory, Kanon was expected to give many more times the effort than anyone else.[l] In order to maintain her weight, her lifestyle was harshly controlled.[l] She would stay awake the whole night beside the sleeping Ikuko watching recordings of her performances.[l] When her first menstrual cycle came, she gained weight and had trouble managing it.[l] It was only after seeking help from a sports medicine expert at a prestigious university that she was able to rebuild her physical condition from the ground up.[l] Behind all this torturous training, though, Kanon maintained her smile for the media, taking time out of her schedule regularly to mold her image as the ‘genius skating girl’.[np]
;; それでも勝つためには他人の何倍もの努力を要求された。[l]減量を中心とした体調管理を徹底した。[l]郁子が寝ている横で、自分の試合のビデオテープを朝まで見続けた。[l]初潮を迎え、体が丸みを帯びてきた時期は大変につらかったが、さる有名大学でスポーツ科学を研究する教授の門をたたき、一から筋肉を整えた。[l]過酷な修練の裏で、天才スケート少女としてマスコミにも笑顔を見せた。[np]
;;note that the line about getting back in shape also has a part about how she basically had to rebuild her body from the ground up, which helps strengthen the image of just how much work she went through

*page23|
[nm t="郁子" s=yuu_7048]“Well, Kanon-chan, it looks like your mother has nothing more to teach you.”[wvl]
;;[nm t="郁子" s=yuu_7048]“もう、お母さんが教えられることなんてほとんどないわね”[wvl]
 Ikuko eventually retired from the ice.[l] She stood beside the rink as a stranger, occasionally pointing out small mistakes.[wvl]
;; いつしか郁子がリンクに立つことはなくなっていた。[l]リンクの外側からまるで部外者のようにときおり声を出し、細かなミスを指摘するだけだった。[wvl]
 Officials from the International Skating Union wanted to separate Kanon and Ikuko.[l] However, a change of coaches was never enforced, due in part to ‘Kanon's strong opposition to it’.[l] And yet Kanon had no memory of ever opposing such a thing...[wvl]
;; 見かねたフィギュアスケート連合の指導者たちが、花音と郁子を引き離そうとした。[l]しかし、花音の強い希望でコーチが代替わりすることはなかった。[l]花音は、強い希望など出した覚えはないのに……。[wvl]
 In the end, Kanon's full potential remained underutilized until the famous coach George Hilton confronted the International Skating Union on her behalf.[l] She may have gotten by in the Novice and Junior lists using only her natural talent, but the Senior level, with its many great, experienced skaters, was more competitive than Kanon could have dreamed.[np]
;; 結果、名コーチとして名高いジョージ・ヒルトンが世界連合に働きかけるまで、花音の才能はずっと七分咲きのような状態だった。[l]天賦の才能だけで勝ち上がってきたノービス、ジュニア時代はともかく、強豪の集うシニアの場では、思うように成績が伸びなかった。[np]

*page27|
 All responsibility fell onto Ikuko.[l] After last year's fiasco, Ikuko's coaching ability was called into question.[wvl]
;; 世間の目はコーチとしての郁子に向けられていた。[l]昨年の故障にいたっては、郁子のコーチとしての管理能力が激しく糾弾された。[wvl]
[nm t="郁子" s=yuu_7049]“I'm sorry, Kanon-chan. It's my fault. I'm sorry for being so inefficient.”[wvl]
;;[nm t="郁子" s=yuu_7049]“花音ちゃん、ごめんね。私で、ごめんね”[wvl]
 The mother would often apologize to her daughter.[np]
;; 母親はよく、娘に頭を下げるようになった。[np]

*page30|
 [nm t="郁子" s=yuu_7050]“It's all my fault. You did nothing wrong, Kanon-chan.”[wvl]
;;[nm t="郁子" s=yuu_7050]“私が、ぜんぶ悪いのよ。花音ちゃんはなにも悪くないからね”[wvl]
 Officials and sponsors from the event, reporters, agents, school teachers... she beseeched various people in various fields.[l] Ikuko's position as Kanon's mother was a small one to begin with, but she had been demoted even further to the level of just ‘a coach.’[l] Yet at the same time, Kanon's arrogance continued to swell.[l] Kanon knew she was being arrogant, but could do nothing about it.[l] Like a rebellious child who wants to kill his parents but knows he can't actually do it, a tiny ‘devil’ was planted within Kanon's heart.[np]
;; 大会の役員、エージェント、スポンサー、スポーツ記者、学園の教員……ありとあらゆる方面に拝み倒した。[l]もともと小さかった母が、より小さいただのコーチに成り下がった。[l]そうして花音の傲慢さを加速していった。[l]花音は自分が傲慢であることを知りながら、どうにもならなかった。[l]まるで、親を殺したいと思うのだが、実際に殺せるはずもなく自分を持て余す思春期の少年のように、ささくれ立った"悪魔"を心の奥深くで養っていった。[np]

*page32|
 And as it grew, that ‘Maou’ of the ice closed the doors to her heart with hatred, endlessly repeating her mother's words.[wvl]
;; 氷の上の"魔王"は、憎悪に心を閉ざし、ただ母の教えを復唱する。[wvl]
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[nm t="花音" s=kan_7513]“Non-chan did nothing wrong.”[wvl]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7513]“のんちゃんは、悪くない”[wvl]
 That's right.[wvl]
;; そう。[wvl]
 After all, who'd ever want to submit to anyone...?[np]
;; 誰が、頭を下げるものか……。[np]

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*page36|
 At last, Kanon fell to the plotting demon.[np]
;; そして、計算高い悪魔に、花音はついに足をすくわれた。[np]

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*page38|
 Time stopped.[wvl]
;; 時が凍りついた。[wvl]
 There was no pain, no fear.[wvl]
;; 痛みも動揺もなかった。[wvl]
 A triple lutz, then a triple toe loop.[l] Her double-triple was a surefire way to score well.[l] Yet it was not the outside edge of Kanon's right skate that collided with the ice, but her back, which hadn't come crashing down since her collision last year.[np]
;; トリプルルッツ、トリプルトゥループのジャンプ。[l]三回転+三回転のコンビネーションは上位に入るためには必須の要素だった。[l]しかし、固い氷の地面に落ちたのは、右足のアウトサイドエッジではなく、この一年間、競技会では一度も打ちつけたことのない背中だった。[np]

*page41|
 ‘Strange,’ Kanon thought.[wvl]
;; おかしい、花音はようやく思った。[wvl]
 ‘Why is there no applause?[l] Why am I in such a position?[l] Why is the music leaving me behind without my permission?’[wvl]
;; なぜ、拍手がないのか。[l]なぜ、こんな体勢で演技をしているのか。[l]なぜ、かかっている曲が自分を置いて勝手に進んでいくのか。[wvl]
 The lutz is considered a particularly difficult counter-rotated jump.[l] That was exactly why Kanon had practiced so hard on it during training.[l] She'd trained until the height-distance ratio of her jump was perfected.[l] She'd continued training until the audience connected Azai Kanon herself with the triple lutz.[l] That very jump, which should have been the celebratory champagne for her glorious victory, betrayed Kanon in the eleventh hour, a mere fifteen seconds into the free skate.[np]
;; ルッツジャンプは後ろ向きに踏み切るジャンプのなかでは、最も難しいとされている。[l]だからこそ、絶対の練習を積んだ。[l]高さと飛距離を両立させた芸術に昇華させるまで。[l]観客が浅井花音といえばルッツだと騒ぐまで。[l]勝利と栄光の象徴とでもいうべきルッツが、この土壇場、フリースケーティングの開始十五秒で花音を裏切った。[np]

*page44|
 ――‘I can't win.’[wvl]
;; ――勝てない。[wvl]
 ‘I'll lose.’[l] She fell on the ice and interrupted her performance.[l] She'd already lost many points.[l] With programs as precise as a machine, a single loose screw could cause total collapse.[wvl]
;; 負ける。[l]転倒に加え、演技を中断した。[l]大幅な減点。[l]機械のように精密なプログラムは、ネジが一本なくなっただけで簡単に崩壊する。[wvl]
 Her victory was long-gone.[l] The triumph that was so easily hers...[np]
;; 消える、優勝が。[l]当然の、勝利が……。[np]

*page47|
 Who was it?[wvl]
;; 誰だ。[wvl]
 Feelings buried in Kanon's heart bared their fangs.[wvl]
;; 花音の胸のうちで鬱屈した感情が牙をむきだしにした。[wvl]
 Who was to blame for this...?[wvl]
;; 誰だ、誰のせいだ……?[wvl]
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 After all, Non-chan did nothing wrong――[np]
;; のんちゃんは、何も悪くないのだから――。[np]

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*page51|
...[np]
;;……。[np]

*page52|
......[np]
;;…………。[np]

*page53|
I flipped open tonight's newspaper.[np]
;;新聞の夕刊。[np]

*page54|
They too made Kanon's disappointing performance out to be the scoop of the century.[np]
;;でかでかと晒された花音の痴態。[np]

*page55|
I couldn't tear myself away from the television or internet that night.[np]
;;その夜、おれは、テレビやインターネットを目をさらのようにして眺めた。[np]

*page56|
If Kanon had merely fallen down, it wouldn't have been an issue, but she stopped and stared at the ice for a whole twelve seconds.[np]
;;ただ転倒しただけならともかく、その後十秒に渡って演技を中断したのだという。[np]

*page57|
Even I'm wondering why Kanon failed to stand up again.[np]
;;たしかに、なぜ立ち上がらなかったのかとおれも思う。[np]

*page58|
It's not rare for a skater to fall down during a competition.[np]
;;転倒はよく見る光景だった。[np]

*page59|
They make an adjustment and continue their program, no matter who they are.[np]
;;どんな選手もすぐに体勢を立て直し、何事もなかったかのように演技を続けていた。[np]

*page60|
Hell, if they only fall down once, they still have a shot at the gold.[np]
;;たとえ一度転倒しても、表彰台に上がる選手はいくらでもいる。[np]

*page61|
However, Kanon continued beyond the regulated free skate duration, and skated overtime. She caused quite a ruckus amongst the spectators, and not in a good way.[np]
;;しかし、ようやく立ち上がった花音は、おざなり演技をした挙句、規定の演技時間すら超過し、観客を悪い意味でどよめかせたという。[np]

*page62|
Cold eyes poured on Kanon from every direction.[np]
;;どこもかしこも花音の失敗を冷ややかに見ていた。[np]

*page63|
I understood the reason after listening to a television interview.[np]
;;その理由は、テレビのインタビューを通して知った。[np]

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*page64|
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7514]“‘Motivated? Of course I was motivated.’”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7514]“『やる気? ありましたよ、もちろん』”[np]

*page65|
Numerous shining floodlights, numerous waiting microphones, welcomed Kanon as she left the arena.[np]
;;会場を出た花音に向けてフラッシュが瞬き、無数のマイクが向けられていた。[np]


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*page66|
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7515]“‘I've told you all before, how many times do I need to repeat myself?’”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7515]“『だから同じこと何回言わせるんですか?』”[np]

*page67|
Kanon pushed the reporters away without even an attempt to hide her displeasure.[np]
;;不快な顔を隠そうともせず、取り囲むレポーターを押しのけていく。[np]


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*page68|
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7516]“‘I heard that someone was gonna kill Coach... er, uh, Ikuko-san. So I hesitated... hey, let me through!’”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7516]“『コーチが、郁子さんが、命を狙われてるって聞いたんです。それで動揺して……ちょっと、道開けてよ!』”[np]

*page69|
This is terrible...[np]
;;最悪だった……。[np]

*page70|
Someone wants to kill Ikuko?[np]
;;郁子さんが命を狙われてる?[np]

*page71|
Who on Earth would believe that?[np]
;;そんな話、誰が信じる?[np]

*page72|
The cops might mount an investigation for good measure, but Gonzou will keep the truth well-hidden.[np]
;;念のため警察の調査もあるかもしれない。[np]

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;;But Gonzou will keep the truth well-hidden.[np]
;;;;けれど、権三はそんな事実を隠し通すだろう。[np]

*page74|
After seeing this report, Gonzou must have burned the threat letter.[np]
;;この報道を見た権三は、もうあの脅迫状を、脅迫の事実を焼き捨てているに違いない。[np]


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*page75|
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7517]“‘A disappointment to my fans!? Oh, is that what they're saying? Well, I'm sorry if that's the case. Just wait for my next performance!’”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7517]“『ファンに失礼な演技!? ああ、そうですか。それはどうもすみませんでした。次にご期待ください!』”[np]

*page76|
At the end she covered the camera with her hand and cut the picture.[np]
;;最後は、カメラを手で覆うような仕草で画面が切り替わった。[np]

*page77|
...This is bad.[np]
;;……なんてことだ。[np]

*page78|
‘Maou’ didn't make a move today.[np]
;;今日も、"魔王"に動きはなかった。[np]

*page79|
The conflict between the Sonoyama Group and the Shin'ei Group ended this morning. I felt a streak of good fortune coming on, but I guess I jumped the gun a bit with that analysis.[np]
;;園山組と新鋭会の抗争は、今日の朝方のうちに決着し、いい風が吹いてきたと思っていた矢先の出来事だった。[np]

*page80|
The image of Kanon on the screen changed to something else.[np]
;;憎々しげに目を吊り上げる花音の映像が切り替わった。[np]

*page81|
It was the winner of this year's Grand Prix of Figure Skating, Seta Makiko.[np]
;;本年度、グランドシリーズ優勝者、瀬田真紀子だった。[np]
;;Before you bitch about Prix, that's the English word for this competition. Deal with it. - pondr back in the chinese tl days

*page82|
[nm t="瀬田" s=set_7001]“‘Well, um... it's really, really been a tough year for me... as you know, I let everyone down at Worlds earlier this year... but, uh...’”[np]
;;[nm t="瀬田" s=set_7001]“『あの……この、一年間本当に、つらくて……世界大会でみなさんのご期待を裏切ってしまったから……あの……』”[np]
;;Keeping it literal helps transmit Makiko's good naturedness, I think. Thinking that she betrayed people's expectations.
;;except that's j-rubbish. time for some a-bomb action. - pondr

*page83|
She took a moment to cry, overcome with emotion.[np]
;;感極まって涙していた。[np]

*page84|
Seta gave a solid performance today, and jumped from her fourth place spot after the short program to first place.[np]
;;瀬田は堅実な演技を披露し、初日四位から、一気に首位に躍り出た。[np]

*page85|
[nm t="瀬田" s=set_7002]“‘I'm really, really thankful for everything today... that's all I want to say...’”[np]
;;[nm t="瀬田" s=set_7002]“『今日は本当に、ありがとうございました。それだけです……』”[np]

*page86|
She showed no sign of acting solely for the television.[np]
;;テレビを意識したような作為的なものは一切なかった。[np]

*page87|
She gave off nothing but a brave and hard-working aura.[np]
;;逆境にめげず、努力を重ねた様子が垣間見えるだけだった。[np]

*page88|
The contrast between these two girls will be great for the media.[np]
;;この対比は、マスコミにとっておいしい餌になる。[np]

*page89|
Kanon's coach, Hilton, refused to comment on her performance today.[np]
;;花音のコーチのヒルトンも、今日の花音の演技についてはコメントを控えていた。[np]

*page90|
Why, then, did Ikuko come out and speak shamelessly?[np]
;;だが、なにをしゃしゃりでてきているのか。[np]

@mface name=ikuko_a_03_b
*page91|
[nm t="郁子" s=yuu_7051]“‘...Murder me...? No, no, no... no such thing has ever come up at all... right, well, uh... I was just making a little joke...’”[np]
;;[nm t="郁子" s=yuu_7051]“『……命を狙われてるって……いいえ、そんな……ええ、それは……軽い冗談のつもりで……』”[np]

*page92|
This worried me.[np]
;;おれは頭を抱えた。[np]

*page93|
[nm t="郁子" s=yuu_7052]“‘Yes. I would like to apologize to everyone here on Kanon's behalf.’”[np]
;;[nm t="郁子" s=yuu_7052]“『はい。花音にかわって、皆さんにお詫び申し上げます』”[np]

*page94|
She bowed down her head and apologized to everyone honestly. It's what she's gotten used to doing.[np]
;;下げ慣れた様子の頭で、いかにも誠実そうに謝罪した。[np]

*page95|
But the fact that she added, ‘on Kanon's behalf,’ annoyed me... because I knew the truth.[np]
;;事情を知っているおれとしては、花音にかわって、という一言が腹立たしくて仕方がなかった。[np]

;SE 着信
@se storage=se_19 loop=true

*page97|
I received a call at that moment.[np]
;;そんなとき、着信があった。[np]

@sse


@mface name=eiichi_b_si_02_b
*page99|
[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7842]“Hey, Kyousuke!”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7842]“くぉら、京介ぇっ!”[np]

*page100|
[nm t="京介"]“What!? I'm in a bad mood!”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“なんだ、おれはいま機嫌が悪いんだ!”[np]


@mface name=eiichi_b_si_18_b
*page101|
[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7843]“Don't piss on me, ass wipe! What the fuck happened today!?”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7843]“ざけんな、バーロー! 今日のありゃなんだ!?”[np]

*page102|
[nm t="京介"]“I DON'T FUCKING KNOW!”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“おれが知るか!”[np]


@mface name=eiichi_b_si_16_b
*page103|
[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7844]“People are talking so much shit about Kanon online! They started tacking w's onto Kanon's name, ‘Kanon-samawwwww...!’ You know what the fuck that means, Bro!?”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7844]“いまネットも炎上してんよ。みんな花音のあとにw(ダブリュー)つけてんよ、花音様www(ダブダブダブリュー)だよ。この意味わかるか!?”[np]
;;that "w's" stuff and how it should be pluralized while it's quoted baffles me. I'm 99% sure it shouldn't be as [ "w"'s ] but fuck me if I know how it should be properly. izmos

*page104|
[nm t="京介"]“More or less. Shit, Eiichi... this is bad news, man.”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“なんとなくわかるよ。ああ、最悪だ!”[np]


@mface name=eiichi_b_si_18_b
*page105|
[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7845]“And what was with the pathetic excuse!? An assassination attempt!? This isn't Golgo 13! Think up something better next time!!”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7845]“なんだ、命狙われてるって!? ゴルゴか!? もうちょっとマシないいわけあるだろうが!”[np]

*page106|
[nm t="京介"]“I know, right? Look, I gotta go.”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“あー、そうだな! もう切るぞ!?”[np]


@mface name=eiichi_b_si_02_b
*page107|
[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7846]“Whatever. Just tell the little shit she better win the Japan Championships, alright!?”[np]
;;[nm t="栄一" s=eii_7846]“とりあえず、花音に伝えろ。てめえは次の全国、ぜったい優勝しろってな!”[np]

*page108|
...Ah, fucking hell![np]
;;……くそっ![np]

*page109|
I had totally forgotten. Eiichi's saying that if Kanon wants to skate at Worlds, she needs to win the Japan Championships.[np]
;;栄一の話によれば、世界大会に出場するには全国大会で優勝しなきゃならんらしいな。[np]

*page110|
And since she lost the Grand Prix, she would have to beat the second place skater by a large point margin to feel secure in her position.[np]
;;それもグランドシリーズを落とした以上、二位に大差をつけて勝たなきゃならない。[np]

*page111|
If she doesn't compete in the World Championships, she'll be ineligible come the next Winter Olympics.[np]
;;世界に出れなきゃ、オリンピックも怪しい。[np]

*page112|
Kanon has already reached her prime skating years, so the upcoming Japan Championships will decide her whole career.[np]
;;花音は年齢的にもいまが全盛期と言われているから、次の全国大会は花音の一生を左右するだろう。[np]

;SE ドアが開く音
@se storage=se_29

*page114|
The door squeaked in protest...[np]
;;玄関で物音。[np]

*page115|
And the most talked-about girl in Japan entered my room.[np]
;;いま、日本で最も話題性のある少女が、おれの部屋に足を踏み入れた。[np]


@camera angle=ll
*page116|
[nm t="京介"]“Hey there. You're pretty late.”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“おかえり。遅かったな”[np]


@chr ll=kanon_a_sic_03_s
*page117|
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7518]“Mm.”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7518]“うん”[np]

*page118|
[nm t="京介"]“Did you eat dinner?”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“メシは食ったか?”[np]


@chr ll=kanon_a_sic_12_s
*page119|
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7519]“Not hungry.”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7519]“いらない”[np]

*page120|
She pouted.[np]
;;口を尖らせる。[np]

@chr ll=kanon_a_sic_02_s
*page121|
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7520]“What?”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7520]“なに?”[np]

*page122|
Apparently she doesn't like my stare.[np]
;;おれの視線が気に入らないらしい。[np]

*page123|
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7521]“......”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7521]“…………”[np]

*page124|
[nm t="京介"]“......”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“…………”[np]

@dellay pos=ll
*page125|
Kanon averted her eyes and headed for the bath.[np]
;;花音は、おれから目を逸らすと、何も言わずに脱衣所に向かっていった。[np]

;SE シャワー
@se storage=se_30 loop=true

*page127|
A few short moments later, I heard the sound of running water.[np]
;;ややあって、水が滴る音が聞こえてきた。[np]

*page128|
Five minutes passed by. Ten minutes. The bathroom kept silent other than the sound of the shower running.[np]
;;五分、十分とたっても、浴室にシャワーのほかに物音はなかった。[np]

*page129|
I heard sobs over the water every now and then.[np]
;;ときおり、しゃくりあげるような声が響くだけだった。[np]
;;1) passive voice!!1!! 2) whimpers is pathetic dogs who are mildly upset. sobs is someone who's genuinely depressed. - pondr

*page130|
The bathroom light never once turned on. Kanon must have been devastated.[np]
;;風呂場の電気もつけず、花音はただ、うちひしがれていた。[np]


@fobgm

@fose

;場転
@hide
@black rule=rule_k_rb time=1000
@wse
@bg storage=bg_01c1100 rule=rule_k_rb time=1000
@show

*page132|
I was shocked upon seeing Kanon walk out of the dark bathroom.[np]
;;ようやく暗い浴室から出てきた花音に、ぎょっとした。[np]

;Kanon立ち絵、裸。

@bgm storage=bgm_109d
@camera angle=r
@chr r=kanon_a_ra_03_b
*page133|
[nm t="京介"]“What the heck, Kanon...!?”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“なにしてんだ……”[np]

*page134|
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7522]“......”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7522]“…………”[np]

*page135|
[nm t="京介"]“Put some clothes on! You'll catch a cold!”[np]
;;[nm t="京介"]“服を着ろ。カゼひくぞ”[np]

*page136|
Her long, wet hair clung to her hips.[np]
;;水びたしの髪。[np]

*page137|
Water droplets glided against her full figure.[np]
;;丸みを帯びた体に、多くの水滴がはねている。[np]

*page138|
With a tormented face, she looked at me like a ghost.[np]
;;生気を失った顔で、幽霊のように、おれを見ていた。[np]

*page139|
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7523]“...Do you...”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7523]“……い?”[np]

*page140|
Her voice was hoarse.[np]
;;かすれた声。[np]

*page141|
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7524]“Do you hate me?”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7524]“嫌い?”[np]

*page142|
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7525]“Do you hate Non-chan too, Nii-san?”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7525]“兄さんも、のんちゃんが嫌い?”[np]

*page143|
I appeased her with a shake of my head.[np]
;;花音の声の調子に合わせるように、おれは小さくかぶりを振り続けた。[np]


@chr r=kanon_a_ra_11b_b
*page144|
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7526]“Do you think I'm a liar?”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7526]“嘘つきだと思う?”[np]

*page145|
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7527]“Everything I said was true...”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7527]“だって、本当だもん……”[np]


@chr r=kanon_a_ra_11_b
*page146|
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7528]“She really did tell me that someone was gonna murder her...”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7528]“本当に、命を狙われてるって言ってたもん……”[np]

*page147|
Fragile.[np]
;;もろかった。[np]

*page148|
That skating star on the ice had vanished.[np]
;;氷上であれほど輝いていた花音は、もう、いない。[np]

*page149|
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7529]“That was why I fell...”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7529]“転んだのは……”[np]

*page150|
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7530]“That was why I lost...”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7530]“負けたのは……”[np]

*page151|
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7531]“I can't think of any reason... except that...”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7531]“理由なんて、見あたらないもん……それ以外に……”[np]


@chr r=kanon_a_ra_11b_b
*page152|
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7532]“Please believe me... Nii-san...”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7532]“信じて……兄さん……”[np]

*page153|
Only a desperate, love-starved girl stood before me.[np]
;;絶望的なまでに愛情に飢えた女の子が、そこにいるだけだった。[np]

*page154|
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7533]“Everyone... everyone's just using Non-chan...”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7533]“みんな……のんちゃんを、利用するの……”[np]

*page155|
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7534]“Mom is for fame...”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7534]“お母さんは自分の見栄のため……”[np]

*page156|
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7535]“Dad is for money...”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7535]“お父さんはお金のため……”[np]

*page157|
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7536]“The media, the sponsors, everyone... everyone, everyone... all the time... every day...”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7536]“テレビの人も、企業の人も、みんな、みんな……いままで……ずっと……そう……”[np]

*page158|
Two thin lips continued to move silently.[np]
;;薄い唇が静かに続けた。[np]


@chr r=kanon_a_ra_11_b
*page159|
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7537]“Who am I...?”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7537]“誰ですか、わたしは……”[np]

*page160|
Like a robot doll with a loose screw, she talked more and more slowly.[np]
;;ねじの切れた機械仕掛けの人形のように、花音の唇の動きがゆっくりと緩慢になっていった。[np]

*page161|
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7538]“......P-pl-...”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7538]“…………さ、い……”[np]

*page162|
She spoke in a soulless, broken manner, but I understood her.[np]
;;魂の抜けた声を、しかし、おれは理解した。[np]

*page163|
‘Please save me...’[np]
;;タスケテクダサイ……。[np]

*page164|
‘Surely there's some gentle person out there, someone who can warm my heart.’[np]
;;誰か、優しく、暖めてください、と。[np]

*page165|
I saw my past self in her.[np]
;;おれは、そんな様子に昔の自分を重ねてしまった。[np]

*page166|
When I was frozen, in a broken house far in the north, I had wished for the same.[np]
;;北国のあばら家で、寒さに震えながら同じようなことを祈ったものだ。[np]


@chr r=kanon_a_ra_11b_b
*page167|
[nm t="花音" s=kan_7539]“Nii-san...”[np]
;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7539]“にいさぁん……”[np]

;黒画面
@hide
@black
@show

*page168|
I know. My emotions for Kanon are more pity than love.[np]
;;愛情よりも同情が勝っているのはわかっていた。[np]

*page169|
And pitiful it is.[np]
;;哀れだった。[np]

*page170|
I'm among those godless fiends who use Kanon.[np]
;;おれだって花音を利用していた一員だ。[np]

*page171|
But in the end, Kanon has no choice but to rely on us heretics.[np]
;;花音はいまや、そんな外道にすがるしかないほど追い込まれていた。[np]

*page172|
And devils can save people, too.[np]
;;けれど、悪魔すら人を救うことはある。[np]

*page173|
Just like that snowy night, when Gonzou saved me.[np]
;;あの晩、浅井権三がおれを救ったように。[np]

*page174|
There are people out there who can't wait for providence to extend a holy savior's hand.[np]
;;カミサマの清く正しい救いの手を待っていられない人間もいる。[np]

*page175|
I thought over what I was about to do.[np]
;;おれはこれから自分がやろうとしていることの意味を考えた。[np]

*page176|
...Even heretics have some pride.[np]
;;外道にも一分の矜持。[np]

*page177|
Very well. I've decided to take responsibility.[np]
;;責任だけは果たさねばと、固く心に決めた。[np]

*page178|
I answered Kanon's request by reaching for her cold skin.[np]
;;おれは冷え切った肌に腕を伸ばし、花音の求めに応じた。[np]

;以下Hシーン
;ev_kanon_h_03a→ev_kanon_h_04aへの流れ。
@call storage="gkh1.ks"
@fobgm
;黒画面
@hide
@black
@show

*page179|
......[np]
;;…………。[np]

*page180|
...[np]
;;……。[np]


@hide
@black
@wait time=500
@ev storage=ev_kanon_icatch
@wait time=4000
@black
@wait time=500

@jump storage="gk04.ks"